A Better Goku

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Austin_Scott

False advertising from the beginning being a sayjin is already a cheat......................................................................

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RyuSenju

don't put this in your library this will probably be dropped soon anyway.

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Archonstine

Interesting premise you've chosen to adopt here. Your writing is pretty good and the pace flows smoothly. The dialogues don't seem forced and while the plot hasn't deviated from the canon, I'm kinda looking forward to when it does. The best part I suppose, is that there are no outrageous grammatical errors and the characterization isn't unrealistic. Overall, a pretty good read for those who aren't looking for gary stu fics with rampant wish fulfilment. Hope you don't go the harem route. I've always found the existence of a harem in Dragon Ball fics, ridiculous.

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jinxqt

wow cool story i must say. interesting choice of words , some spelling/grammatical errors which is understandable assuming that u do not care for some revisions. A LOT of scenarios are inappropriate and unacceptable, please be considerate of others feelings. i suggest that u write professionally and ethically. adding on to that, if u could please refrain from using vulgar words, then maybe i’ll think about giving u another star. that’s all. (reviewed professionally, only facts have been stated) -rated by jijinxcutieeee

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Hasan_Shopnil

It’s good......Thanks for the new fic.....Please don't forget early Dragon Ball Techniques (like 4 eitches technique,Evil Containment Wave and Sealing Talisman,Thunder Shock Surprise,Wolf Fang Fist,Dragon Fist,Paralysis,Telekinesis,Magic Materialization,Healing,Kiai,Invisible Eye Blast etc.) and specially remember Saiyans have Mimicry,they don't get Zenkai Boost (except Goku Black has broken Saiyan Physique) after Super Saiyan,remove MC's Tail weakness,gain Space Survivability and achieve a lot of Transformations like Oozaru Control,Ikari/Wrathful State(Controlable),False Super Saiyan,Super Saiyan Full Power Kaioken,Super Saiyan Grade2&3 Perfected,SSJ2 Full Mastery,SSJ3 Full Power(Cumber),Ultimate/Mystic/Potential Unleashed Saiyan Form(Gohan),Super Full Power SSJ4 Limit Breaker(GT Gogeta),Super Saiyan God,Super Saiyan Rage(Future Trunks),SSGSS Blue x20 Kaioken,SSGSS Blue (Controled Berserk),SSGSS Blue Evolution(Vegeta&Gogeta),Legendary Super Saiyan Full Power(Broly-Controlable),Beast Saiyan Form(Gohan Beast),Perfected Mastered Ultra Instinct,Ultra Ego.

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Daoista_jdjfm

Bulma trato de matar a Goku, y el no hizo nada, no se supone que es un Goku mejor? No se, Goku mejor en que sentido? No veo que sea más inteligente, de hecho parece más tonto, supongo que en lo único mejor sería un¿power Up?

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Hasan_Shopnil

Thanks for the New Dragon Ball Fic and I like It quite a lot so please add Dragon Ball Fillers,Movies,Dragon Ball GT,Dragon Ball Heroes,Dragon Ball Super Anime and Manga,Super Dragon Ball Heroes and You could even add Ultra Dragon Ball,Dragon Ball Multiverse,Dragon Ball AF etc. after adding all the Original.