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Aaron Darcey Hernandez, a boy, which just turned 18, pondered whether to pursue college or not at a lonely part when a nearby BAM echoed through the city.
Before he could investigate everything went white and when he opened his eyes he was inside a body that was not his own.
As a panel appeared in front of him "Welcome to (Wishful Land) "
A popular novel series he had only heard about. But refused to read. He only knew the main characters.
(Currently Remaking)
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The story is somewhat intriguing, but unfortunately, only a few chapters are available, and I am struggling to understand its plot. Nevertheless, I am eagerly anticipating what the writer has in store for us. The quality of writing is exceptional, and I adore the main character and the narration style. However, some refinement and elaboration are needed to make it truly exceptional. Overall, keep up the fantastic work, and I cannot wait to read more!
The story is lovable and the writing quality is top-notch, really a good book to read but regrettably, only a few chapters have been released.
Not a horrible first chapter in terms of concept, but the Grammer and overall writing could be improved. I want things to be more clarified and I also want some more background on the characters. It all seems quite rushed and shallow. Delve into the characters more, make them more 3d. Story wise I think this is pretty good, although there were some things that were unnecessary. Keep getting better!
Heya, If your wondering why theres a lack of chapters, I am gonna remake it when I finish writing my new novel, as I figured I need more experience to write this novels story
Check out my new novel, "GodKiller's Ballad" For the time being (Everlasting Magus) will be on hiatus, as Im gonna remake it in a year or so. But in that time hope you can follow my new work, there will be a mass release in a few months. Around 10-30 chapters
The story is intriguing but the way the plot is worded may be confusing at first. There are some grammar mistakes but nothing too serious that may break the immersion. However, I would lie if I said that I'm not interested in how Jack deals with the new abilities! Keep it up! Just a little more attention to grammar and plot progression and it will become a fantastic work! Good luck, author!
The story is unique, and the plot is seriously enjoyable. The writing style that the author uses is pretty good, too. The writing quality is pretty good, and the only advice I'll give is to work on the character design.
Its pretty good, though the writing seems rushed sometimes the story is quite easy to swallow.
The story was interesting so far. I liked the cover. The description was rather cool. Word of advice; don't beg for collections. It gets annoying.
Nice work! I love the flow and how you narrated the story. Really interesting concept and can't wait to see how the Jack deals with his new abilities. Keep updating!
lol indeed a 5 star, I think you did amazing as well, this needs to blow up, so make sure to add (clickbait) tags ;)