Good but always heard its better to give more detail
ch 0 1 An Interesting Turn Of Events
Fantasy · LanumKing
"Holy shit dude, you are the perfect trap. Not only do you look like a girl but you also sound like one. Ain't no way."
Fantasy · HotAsianBoy
Bro sounds like his on some coke😂
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Fantasy · HotAsianBoy
Writing is great, story and chaacters are good has a lot of potential
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Good start, the writing is amazing and the story for now is living up to it. It’s very good at catching the feelings of the characters. Keep going its got potential.
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The mans be crazy for woman, me personally i can never have that, the book is good and the female is interesting but i hope for many love triangles
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Very unique to say the least, the mc started quite sad after that break up man. I wonder how there whole relationship will bloom from here im expecting many love triangles
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Good start kinda feels like rick riordan novels though