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The Callum family wants a daughter in law for their son, Caith Saint. She has to be pure in order to save him from a curse put up on him by Hades for refusing to marry his daughter, Melonie. Luckily, the fates send them to the White family for Hennesia, a direct descendant of the line of Hestia and Astrea. But will she accept this dark immortal for a husband?
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It has potential to be a good novel. Only that it has some issues that can potentially remove it from the spotlight. Writing quality: It has some mismatch between tenses, and long paragraphs turn it harden to read. Try to split the long ones in fractions. Character: It lacks metaphors, analogies and the work about what they are feeling, their wishes, their struggles. It lacks a connection with the reader. All in all, keep up the good work :)
This book is not bad but good, life of a novel writer is hard but life is like a camera focus, on what's important, capture the good times,develop from the negatives and if things don't work out,Take another shot.