Above the heavens

LV 3

AspiringWriter3

So far, it’s an interesting story! The dialogue carries the overall plotline, while descriptions further include the depth of the world itself. However, I would recommend for the author to revise their writing before posting, seeing as names are quite similar to others and other words are capitalized when they are not meant to be. But that is a greivance of my own, and nothing more. All in all it has a unique spin on what I like to call, “Quantum Leap based,” stories and the like.[img=Loving it]