The Silver General: An Unlikely Love Story

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Hial_gb4

To he author, I've been reading this book since it only had two chapters, though it could sound like am impatient but could you speed up the relationship between Reyan and Elena, I mean they've known each other for a while and there hasn't been much development. Other than that I'd say that this book is awesome and could be a hit

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Amina_Balanya

I love how the author has used multiple povs and each pov is unique with different personalities, you can tell that it's difficult, well I know it's difficult for me.but there's some grammar mistakes here and there and the paragraphing can vary a bit but I can notice some gradual improvement as the story progresses but that's just my opinion.

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BIG_BAD_WOLF2000

Great novel with a stellar plot, the difficulty of writing a story with multiple POV's is something I can't even begin to imagine, I enjoyed my time reading it, please add more chapters.

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Knightofthedead

Fantastic novel, the story is very interesting. I am dying to know what happened next. Please make more chapters as I want to know what happens next

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TheOtherNoble

Writing in first person from multiple POVs is a daunting challenge for most authors. The effort put into this story is clearly significant, and ultimately pays off. The violence may be a bit much for squeamish readers, but the characters are well-designed and the plot seems like it has a clear trajectory. Keep up the good work, Author!

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Webstar3493

it's a nice historical novel, the synopsis is not that detailed yet it was wonderful. sounds like this book will come out on top one day! Great job author ✨

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Charming_liar

Well this is my first book and to be honest I'm kinda having fun with it and am giving myself a good review cause if I don't like my own book then I shouldn't expect others to like it too.

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LuRai

Writing Quality: I am not a big fan of the first-person view just because it has many flaws. But you did a great job. That being said try to keep it to first person, I noticed it switch mid-way a couple of times which can become confusing. The flashbacks though rather than pov you can in the third person (just a suggestion for ease of writing) Also there's an overabundance of details for your first-person view, details are great but keep in mind the reality of someone talking or telling a story, it might not be as in-depth as you're doing. Story development: loving that everything isn't going super fast, definitely allows for character growth and development, loving the gore! Character design: love love love the characters, so adorable. I love the cold personality obscured by childhood trauma and the innocent unknowing process. one of my favorite troupes. Overall great job looking forward to the next chapters :D

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Goddess1ofchaos

Generously if you ask me why I give this book a five stars vote, I'll tell you to try it. The switch of POVs makes it interesting. Keep going author, the novel has potential. Am eager to see how the story unfolds.

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Dixerqua

I'd like to offer my honest review. Firstly, I must commend the novel's beginning, which is undeniably a perfect 10 out of 10 for its ability to instantly engage the reader. The utilization of multiple points of view is well-executed, a feat that is certainly challenging, so kudos to the author for achieving it seamlessly. Lastly, the writing style deserves praise for being smooth and easy to follow.

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_fall_

I liked the story. Author may need to focus on the way he/she is writing style, alittle but overall the story is good. Good luck with the book.

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WRChowdhury

Must say, the novel is written by a skillful hand. Impressive, in my humble opinion. Enjoyed the pacing and how everything sums up from plot to style, its really worth a read. Hope to be reading more of this fantastic story.

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Prince_charming57

Nice work of art and engaging characters, the book deserve 5 stars.