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Charming_liar
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This is how I picture him, this is his mercenary outfit.
I heard a constant annoying knock on my door, it must have been Mikael or Emile. No one else comes to talk to me, hell they can't even look me in the eye and with good reason. I got up from my bed, picked up my weapons that were leaning on the wall, I first tied my two scimitar swords to my back then my long sword around my waist before wearing my hood and mask. I didn't bother with my bow I just left it right where it was.
The Silver General: An Unlikely Love Story
History · Charming_liar
Thanks for reading it
ch 32 Chapter thirty one:The Fair's Disruption
The Silver General: An Unlikely Love Story
History · Charming_liar
By the way. Thanks you were the first person to send me a power vote so it means a lot
ch 26 Chapter twenty five: The liana festival
The Silver General: An Unlikely Love Story
History · Charming_liar
Well for one great start. I'm not sure I can even write the number of words you just did
ch 0 1 The arise of Rosa
Death befallen
History · Goddess1ofchaos
Well apart from some grammar mistakes and the author forgetting to edit something I commented it's a good story leaving you wanting more
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Uhm I think the word you were looking for was tick to 11
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Am a dude but thanks
The first two are okay but the last one was unnecessary
The words wouldn't change. His eyes scanned through the letter in its entirety. Then, they did it again. And again. The words wouldn't change. Even when his eyes became bloodshot, when they tried to pierce through the letter as though to reach a hidden truth, the words wouldn't change. They were dead. His companions were dead. His brother was dead.
Path of the Skeleton King
Fantasy · MiniBorkLazer
Like here you've repeated the words ,the words wouldn't change three times
The words wouldn't change. His eyes scanned through the letter in its entirety. Then, they did it again. And again. The words wouldn't change. Even when his eyes became bloodshot, when they tried to pierce through the letter as though to reach a hidden truth, the words wouldn't change. They were dead. His companions were dead. His brother was dead.
Path of the Skeleton King
Fantasy · MiniBorkLazer
Come on throw your Mc a bone.
Red stained my cheeks as I suddenly realized I wore very little at all. Having been assaulted many times, I was used to waking up with torn or missing clothes, but this felt different. My dress, if you could call it that, had long since been shredded, barely preserving enough integrity to preserve my modesty. A multitude of cuts and bruises poked through the bloodstained cloth, ranging from puffy scars to cuts still oozing blood. Life had not treated this body kindly in recent months, and, having experienced many of these kinds of injuries myself, I was surprised a girl this age had even survived.
The Forsaken Hero
Fantasy · Author_of_Fate
You really hate your mc
ch 0 2 Aren't we all on the same side?
The Forsaken Hero
Fantasy · Author_of_Fate
Now that's just petty
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The Forsaken Hero
Fantasy · Author_of_Fate
Thanks for that
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The Silver General: An Unlikely Love Story
History · Charming_liar
I got some questions ,how do you know all this?
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The Forsaken Hero
Fantasy · Author_of_Fate
For a new book it really has great potential. The romance, the mystery and the author is not stingy with the descriptions. It's a really good book and it'll deserves the praise.
Two worlds Apart:The Forbidden Love
Fantasy · Webstar3493