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Amy a young adult who has always hoped to fill the space of loneliness, emptiness inside her. She and loneliness have been one for a long time.
There was nothing that could pull her out of her trance of loneliness. Not even her own family members.
What would happen when she meets a guy who she befriended and then turned her world of dullness into a colourful world??
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Write a reviewGreat plot I love the way you unfold your story. It's also got well paced. Doubtless this is a brilliant piece of work. I notice a few deficiencies though regarding diction. There is a line in chapter1 where you say, "...I put on a shower..." You could have said,"... take a shower...I stead. It's not the only line. I would advise that you work with someone who is proficient in the English language. Apart from that I love your work. Keep up the high standard.
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I love the story it’ really good 👍🏽 👍🏽👍🏽