Plaything of Gods

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I Only read the first two chapters so I cannot tell much about the story except that I really like the idea but I really do not like the writing style. It is just a giant mess, without any quotation marks and not a really good description like who is speaking when and who is doing what. So shortly pretty hard to read and it takes the whole fun away. I personally do not know how to write a story properly but would really recommend the author to get someone to reread the chapters before publishing and also to read some other books which are written in English and try to orient the writing style on them like how to formulate the sentences and so on. Anyways I really hope this story improves and I would be happy to read if it if the aforementioned is the case.