Space whales? Nope rather deal with devils.

LV 12

Teraten

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LV 15

Falsic

It's practically impossible to read. There are too many run-on sentences and a large underutilization of punctuation. I can read through stuff like machine translation just fine, but this had me within the first 2 chapters. My recommendation for the author is to find someone to proofread your work or just use grammar software.

LV 13

Hiroton

The writing overall is pretty decent 👌. But for those like who find it a big turn-off to read this fic, I recommend you don't read it and that the author should give warning in his description. there is plenty of Yuri and ntr in the works and how can it even be said to be a harem when it's clearly polyamory? Some of his girls are into other girls and ask him to get other girls for them, while those new girls also like other girls and he helps them willingly to cuck himself...

LV 1

the_banana_catfrfr

for a novel with commissioned chapters this sure is trash....................................................................................................

LV 4

RealJoke_Pota

So far I've enjoyed what I have read. Question though since the MC has Soul edge will he gain his own set of armor like the past/previous users of soul edge?

LV 4

FrankThTank

this is how you write a good non confusing world travel fanfic.... ps plz have them go to fairytail next it is truely wifu heaven

LV 15

Ewan_Shin

Question for the author; is this the same story that goes by the name lewd worm cyoa on your patreon?

LV 5

Dropletcloud

I getting good at reading knew things, but how bad is the original WORM world?

LV 4

WhiteWizardIan

I have enjoyed what has been written so far (5 chapters) and hope that it keeps going well! I've enjoyed most of this authors works, so I have high hopes for this series!!!

LV 4

Dao_leader

If your a yuri lover then this is your piece of cake.

LV 1

Skiffard

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LV 4

Dark_void

Buena novela, me gusta el ritmo de la historia y como están llendo las cosas, y además que los limones están bien escritos y descritos, Dejaré que se acumulen los capítulos para seguir leyendo después

LV 14

Gishi_4187

Keep up the good work and please keep this fic going because I haven't seen many CYOA's on WN.

LV 1

DaoistwWp33J

great story!