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Max got sent to a medieval world by our beloved truck Kun. In this world people use something called "qi" to power their kickass armor suits, known as Macs. He's just a regular guy, or so he thinks, until he finds out that he's got double the qi of anyone else his age. Suddenly, he's accepted into the best warrior school around and ready to kick some butt! And with his modern world know-how, he's gonna take on this medieval world like a boss. Let's see what kind of trouble he can get into!
Alright, listen up folks, I'm a total noob when it comes to writing, so don't expect me to churn out daily updates like a well-oiled machine. I'll update whenever I finish a chapter, and if any of you got any bright ideas on how I can spice up the story or where to improve it, do not hesitate to let me know!
This is my first time attempting to write something original, so I'm diving into the deep end here. Wish me luck, folks, because I'm going to need it!
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Its only been five chapters so far, but it shows promise. The grammar, pilling up of text in massive paragraphs, and constant pov switches can disorientating so work on that Author. The World is just introduced but its a medieval world like most, and it is slightly different, since instead of mana, qi is used, and it was a switch up at the norm. The MC is introduced as your usual over worked office worker with a chance of redemption and getting a better chance at life in this new world. So as I said, it shows promise but needs work.
You guys! Don't skip before reading! He's really really really good at this! Big props author! 👏👏 Just a lil more updating stability 🙏❤️🥳
This story really shows promise, although it has generic tropes, it's well done, it's got great visual storytelling, the characters have great dialogue and are interesting too. I can't wait to see how this story unfolds. Keep it up author 🙌