I like books, and I write a bit too.
2020-10-16 Joined New Zealand
My goodness, what a great "first" chapter. Apart from your MC Elias having the same as mine which pulls me out of it a little, it's got a great intro to the world, the characters and the system already in only one chapter and that really hooks me. THATS ACTUALLY CRAZY! Imma binge the rest another day but I'm highly interested in where this will go as I've been following your writing process on Discord too. Keep it up [img=recommend]
ch 0 2 Recollections
Fantasy · DigitalFootprint
I thought it would be a generic guy goes back to the beginning story, but telling it from an antagonistic point of view is a new take I haven't seen. can't wait to see how it goes with Dante's next try
ch 0 1 The Beginning after the End
Games · Death_Penalty
That Guardian got me cackling, I swear she's just teasing him by showing up, telling Evan very little, and just leaving mysteriously.
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Wow, what a great first chapter. Already making me feel something with that interaction between Xander and Amara. I do feel like it's a bit too fast and I'm still unsure what this book will be about, but it's a really great start and I'm def gonna keep reading it!
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 (The Dragon's Lair)
Fantasy · lucifurge
I Love the way you write action in your novel so far and I really like Evan. Can't wait to see what his newfound powers can do. Keep it up!!
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I really love the way this has been set up. It feels like I'm in for a crazy journey with Elias into this mysterious world. For a first work, I'm incredibly impressed, especially with how much planning has gone into this. If you ever need something to cure your LOTM addiction, this is it. Def a page turner!
The Path to Genesis
Fantasy · DigitalFootprint