nice story too be honest very nice it looked like it took you so long to write it if i would rate it i would say and 8 out of 10 the chapter 1 was the worst though to be honest but overall it is and 8 out of ten and also the spellings you make so many mistakes when writing but everyone makes mistakes
nice story too be honest very nice it looked like it took you so long to write it if i would rate it i would say and 8 out of 10 the chapter 1 was the worst though to be honest but overall it is and 8 out of ten and also the spellings you make so many mistakes when writing but everyone makes mistakes