The System of Villain

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Patience_Agboola

Well there is nothing wrong with this book because it's perfect but the only thing that is wrong is that you turned each chapter to a different volume

LV 11

ThreyaMidnight

Hey, I love your work. however, as I stated in the comment I made, there were some grammatical errors that kept me (and possibly other readers) from completely enjoying the story. If you have the time to edit them, please do so! As it will increase reader's satisfaction.

LV 1

redlady

I am not going to spoil the book.The writing is good and the plot is interesting.It is worth reading ! Love it !

LV 2

Shaine_chan

Personally, I could say that the plot is interesting as well as the MC's character. These kinds of character design interest me the most and I bet others will find it interesting too. My only concern is the writing quality of the book. I suggest not using multiple punctuation marks and paying attention to your grammar, capitalization, etc for reader better reading experience.

LV 3

DubiousTone

I just finished reading the latest chapter of this novel and I am amazed by the quality of the writing. keep going!!!! I highly recommend this novel to anyone looking for a well-written and engaging story that will leave you wanting more. Keep up the amazing work, author!

LV 1

MissScarlet

This story is really interesting, although, it needs a bit of tweaking on the grammatical side. And, personally, I think the plot is really cool! Anyway, I hope the author keeps working on this one, since it has a good potential.

LV 2

baalnana

interesting plot but there are too many noticeable grammatical errors