/ Fantasy / Fallen Prince: I Shall Become The One True King
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Author here, sorry for the long pause on this novel, but i would like to know if you guys feel I should rewrite it or just continue the current story path.
I'd really appreciate the feedback.
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SYNOPSIS....
A tragic tale of a Prince who lost everything.., his family, home, friends, his once luxurious life...now forced to live at the bottom of it all.
Whilst trying to keep to his now deceased family's dying wish.., with dangers and wickedness all around him, he now struggles to survive on a daily basis, while also trying to acquire what he'd lost
watch as a forgotten but resourceful prince slowly makes his way back to the top..., changing more and more to adapt to this new world he never noticed until now
Will he survive or not?, keep reading to find out.
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Write a reviewHonest review ... The book has a lovely plot and is definitely promising but the writing is sort of plain. Took my time to read the book. it's understandable
The story is too plain to read .I would advise the writer to work on it from the start .Best of luck
"The story is quite simple and easy to understand, but there are a few things that make it less enjoyable. First, there is too little dialogue text; try to make it more abundant. Second, in the beginning, you could have made readers feel more deeply connected to the novel, but there are some factors hindering it. Nevertheless, overall, it's good and impressive. Keep up the spirit!"
Nice one Author The Protagonist is definitely going through a lot with the loses playing out in his life Keep up the good work Can't wait for more chapters
Author Lord_GrimX101
Other than the paragraph comments I shared, your book has great possibilities. But I do agree with previous feedback that you need variety in your writing style, But overall, continue writing! :)