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Kang_Minrin
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are you using these names because of international reader them it's good otherwise change the name to Korean namesand please use an attractive covercover have influence too somehowbut remember you need to follow every of others advice just do as your heart says
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Please love me cold General
Urban · Gift_Maigida
Do your best
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Dreams come through
Please love me cold General
Urban · Gift_Maigida
If you are writing K because it's fiction it's okay but please edit the sentence structure
"Dad again with this topic I told you already my mind is made up. Moms legacy still leaves on even though she was murdered in the wars she still published the biggest secret that led to the victory for country K winning the war. I promise am not going to die out there the military is a brutal place to be in but i promise to come back stronger and most of all alive so cheer up"Kimal said as she hugged her dad and pecked him on the checks.
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Urban · Gift_Maigida
at . please edit it all mistakes will be edited
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Urban · Gift_Maigida
don't right 28 right after full stop
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Urban · Gift_Maigida
K is Korea
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Urban · Gift_Maigida
so you have made
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Urban · Gift_Maigida
I mean change said to replied
"Thank you" Kimla said. Finally you got this Kimsy she smiled to herself and left heading to the mall to buy the things she would be needing..
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Urban · Gift_Maigida
kimla replied and headed to
"Thank you" Kimla said. Finally you got this Kimsy she smiled to herself and left heading to the mall to buy the things she would be needing..
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Urban · Gift_Maigida
sister but you never introduced
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Urban · Gift_Maigida
Alvin was 18.. .. .
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Urban · Gift_Maigida
hahaha I like this
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Urban · Gift_Maigida
don't add with with again and again rather use comma
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Urban · Gift_Maigida
please fix this sentence . You have the beauty to be a model but why did you choose military. something like that roughly
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Urban · Gift_Maigida
Fix it like she was 23 with these features . don't write kimla age it's kinda awkward in my point of view
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Urban · Gift_Maigida
Busan in Korea ?
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Urban · Gift_Maigida
a true hallyu wave lover
In Hyuk "Dad! Dad! Mom!"
Shouting for mistakes
History · Kang_Minrin
oh I didn't consider that . right I should right my lady
Court lady Myeong suk whispered, "Royal Highness, he's just a servant."
Shouting for mistakes
History · Kang_Minrin
This One is great masterpiece in the making . The story line , twisted plots , perfect harmony and flow makes it one of the best on the block.
She tempted the devil
Fantasy · MBU_Overlord_6594