My master lived for 100000 years and became unbeatable.

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Albinus_istamar

A very good work, interesting, well carried out, a lot of drama that is something that catches the reader, many possibilities of being one of the good novels. All the best

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ToufiqUlAlam

Blood-boiling situation. I want to see how he will get his powers back. It will be an amazing journey for sure. Hooked! MOre chapters. please.

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Captain_doubloon

so i read these book and here are my thoughts: The story depicts a lovable master deciples journey with action, drama, and good character descriptions. I loved the way story was written and can't wait for vol. 2. Moreover, I think these must get contracted, well anyways good luck and keep it up

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Ranch64

Your book was so good...it kept me hooked for the whole time. I hope you continue your story. I can see the hard work through your writing. Keep up the good work. [img=update]

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Imagination_7

Shamelessly again here after completing 1st seson , phew looking back i really needed to work it out , whatever i will continue to grow and work on my writing i know starting is unbearable but in second second season i can assure you , it will be different . Will be coming back after a short break . thanks for your support

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Imagination_7

I am giving my own novel 5 star rating huh .... anyway you are your biggest supporter so i am supporting my own novel 😉 I am kind of shameless even though i can say that this novel has completed 50000 words and also almost 50 chapters. I don't know who is liking this and who is not but whoever is reading is i really appreciate it . Look forward to the further developments . I am a new author so may be it won't be entertaining for everyone but some may like it. thank you for reading my novel whoever is reading it or looking forward towards it a big thanks . I appreciate your support.

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ToufiqUlAlam

I love your writing style, mainly diction. For me, this type of diction is very hard to pull off. It's difficult to continued writing in this fashion. However, you proved yourself a formidable writer! The theme is overused no doubt, but your take on cultivation was indeed something interesting. It's like One Punch Man's Hagemanto hero vibe. All it takes is 'a punch from Saitama'---the ultimate villain slayer. I hope you definitely finish the story. your challenge will be to keep the story entertaining. If the hero does not face much bigger challenges, it will soon be very boring. You have to be more daring and should not fear to test newer ideas. I hope your novel flourishes. Good Luck.