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A mysterious pandemic called "Kleine-Levin Syndrome" has infected nearly half of the human population, causing terror around the world.
As the pandemic worsened, a famous gaming company created a game called "FOS" (Fantasy Online System), which successfully lowered the level of fear and depression among everyone around the world.
One day, a high school student named Ethan received a mysterious message while playing FOS from someone named Athena. The message referred to the location of the cure formula to end the pandemic, which was inside of the game. But, it turned out there was a wicked side that was after the formula. Would Ethan manage to find it and end this pandemic?
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This is one of those idem gems that you can find rarely on the internet, i’m not the person with the biggest knowledge in books but i m a connoisseur. this story is amazing, 5/5, the writing is very good, the plot is very interesting. Little advice: think a lot about the sequel and characters because you have something big here.
This book writing quality is insanely great and story development and setting are great, I really love this book people should support the author who write this godly novel. Keep it up bro fighting
The first chapter successfully intrigued me. Wow, great for my daily reading material. Good writing spirit
Its a nice one, keep going,it has different perspective so I think it's going to be one of the outstanding genre soon good job,don't stop keep going till you get there👍
Love the story! I like all the element of the stories. But but there is a slightly wrong use of language. Keep up the good work, author! I'm really curious with the ending.
Lets's start from the beginning, shall we?The writing could improve a little bit in two aspects, but that's a matter of practice and reading.Aside from that, the plot is PURE GOLD!I never thought of something like that and it's BRILLIANT!The characters got me a bit off, since the first chapter didn't show their charisma, but I know it's just a matter of time.Keep it up, author, because I'm looking forward to it.Also, the world building is amazing!
System novels are my favourite when it comes to action, and this one is one of those superb system novels[img=recommend]
I always loved system type novels AND THIS IS LIT! I honestly didnt expect this to be honest but I feel like I just became a fan of your work(≧◡≦)I know that writing chaps takes time but um… can u like… slap 50 chaps in the next… lets just say.. hour? xD jokes a side, TOTALLY RECOMMEND THIS ART OF A NOVEL! (♡μ_μ)
i love all system novels and now I've been inspired to write one. your work is a good piece and I know it's worth giving you five stars. Keep up the good work, author! make system novels shine!
First and foremost, your synopsis can be improved! I think it's just weird to say that FOS can reduce depression. Do you mean the number of patients afflicted with depression or do you mean the level of depression? You have to be careful with your words because you are basing them on medical jargon. Second, concerning medical jargon, kindly refer to my notes on your first chapter, I hope it can help you tackle some story technicalities that you might have not seen while writing ^^. Third, your sentence structure is quite good and you use a variety of vocabulary in your story. Although you tend to jump the descriptions of the actions which caused me quite a bit of confusion. Fourth, some of your phrasings are a bit awkward to read. Consider editing your work, perhaps? Lastly, good job! I can see how much you worked hard to create this story. If you try to consider my suggestions and reread your work for other issues that I didn't comment on, you can fix the possible plot holes and improve the overall reading quality. That's all so far. I hope you don't look at this review in a negative light and that see that I'm merely giving you words of encouragement to improve your work. If I have offended you so far, I apologize for that is not my intention. Please continue persevering and I hope for the best for your writing journey!
It’s a very interesting story, the plot is amazing, a lot grammar error here and there but it doesn’t affect one’s understanding of the scene. I recommend reading this.
Nice one auth, to be sincere, i think I'm a bit jealous, you world building is no doubt amazing, I really envy your writing quality and style.. it's good, hurts me to say it to another author... good job👍