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when a guy dies and reincarnated from r.o.b comes to the marvel universe also travel across omniverses
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I do not own marvel or anything
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Write a reviewguy is even good grammar and such, the beginning I liked, more after the chat group, changes the name and such and the female characters he calls them wives of nothing '-', doing what is harem and quite cliche. well it looks like a wish fulfillment fanfic
It's a big trash ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฎ
begening good but after mcbecome marvel strongest its become trash mc personally trash he just call girls his wife from the first meeting stupid and worried about justice league and scared to change the plot becuz miles lol trash cowrd mc for me not good this a trash
Amazing. Beautiful. Great. Wow. Spectacular. Immaculate. Pristine. Awesome. Never before seen. One of a kind. Something else. Mind blown. Game changing. A must read.
Hello keep up the good work i like the story very much i'll be looking forward for more chapters[img=update]
Okay, the concept is good but the execution is bad, the protagonist have a blank personality, and he has no focused objective, having just small jobs in each new universe with no endgoal in mind, then there is the writting, it is bad.
I dont care what otherse say its good enough for me ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Writing quality is much left to be desired, lot of mistakes either in spelling or -ed or -ing. Story is mediocre and clichรฉ, there is the mc that in the first chapters gets powers and skills that are simply unnecessary. The mc seems blank and dull. The story is somewhat fast paced. The only good about is the idea mc being a celestial ( I don't see those much around ) and that it's in marvel universe but again the writing and the pace of the story makes it dull and boring.
it be 5.0 I'm hope he gets the other forces and will there be a harem since it looking so far like one will there be TV show characters in the chat group?
For me the story actually good. Its's not that bad like other people say. You should give it a try.
i like the story, keep improving [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
Man I must really thank you "author". Please don't stop releasing chapters or writing. For having written this beautiful story, I still persevere in writing it.I know it may not be easy but my support is really great.To improve your writing, I recommend that you use Grammarly and Bing GPT to correct repetition errors as many people or some simply stop reading the story because of some Repeated words or repeated sentences, I don't mind reading, but this during your writing can hinder development not only during writing but also attracts negative tension. Grammarly to correct grammatical errors and Bing or chatGPT to correct possible repetition or clarity errors.
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a guy reincarnates him as an all-powerful cosmic being You already know how this is going, the typical protagonist without a purpose since he can do everything