Man and machine

LV 4

please_be_gentle_

It was average before it went in a sick direction

LV 4

Aboooood1

I like this fanfiction and to the mc I post this pic

LV 15

Gh0st00

I'm just going to say this by chapter 11 the MC is a little messed up in the head just reach chapter 11 and if you like whatever you read then start over at chapter 1 and go on but if not you're wasting your time

LV 4

Golden_dragoon

5 star bcoz i like it.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

LV 13

Ze_plant

we go brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

LV 15

Joseph_Hill_7805

Full of huge plot holes and a very mentally unstable MC

LV 4

ExistentialVoid

Honestly my problem is with the MC, if you like morally dark MC then this is for you. For me it's not, I tend to aim for perfectly balanced MC (Gray Area). The Writing Quality and World Background is on point, then again It's too much for my sensible heart! XD Have Fun!

LV 2

T0LO

Não gostei muito do sadismo do MC com harleen, tirando isso ficou bom __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

LV 13

yupokai_1

It has the Yupokai seal of approval so take of that what you will

LV 4

No_No_4004

Your story has an interesting premise and potential along with a steady update schedule and I hope you improve on your writing.

LV 5

Venerable_Read3r

(Ch18)Iam writing this review cuz apparently author wants 15 reviews its a d!ck move btw author people will hate u just because u want reviews or they will put low starts after all reviews are reviews no matter how low and so far i like it obviously there quite a few mistakes that i don't like but he is the author so he can write whatever he wants

LV 13

DiligentKraken

I don't like venti template but I look forward to how you'll utilize his abilities

LV 2

Daoist866791

Has potential, let’s see how this goes. 💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾💪🏾

LV 4

KsoGhost

Has potential, let’s see how this goes.

LV 4

Zed1_Eren_

I don't know where this novel is gone it's just too confusing bad plot or bad writing by author it's potential has gone downhill

LV 4

lNell

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elo padre ma santa moca chinpaula! beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

LV 3

Kamishiro_Andres

Bueno estoy muy contento con la historia, aunque el Mc es un poco cuestionable en su toma de decisiones, me parece muy disfrutable la historia, aunque obvio que varia con el gusto de cada uno. Pero en mi humilde opinion le doy a esta historia 5☆ porque disfrute leerlo.

LV 4

Comar

I Would say its above average in some aspects, could go in a intresting direction.