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He had taken up the names of Noah and Leo. In his two previous lives, he had conquered his way to the top in various different worlds, only to lose to aliens known as the Horde both times.
Reincarnated for the third time, he vowed to unite his new world to defeat the Horde once and for all, so he took up the name of Xin to conquer his way to the top of the cultivation world and united it.
As he faced the familiar aliens once again with his united alliance of powerful cultivators, Xin fought tooth and nail as his goal of defeating the Horde neared. Before reaching the queen, Xin was betrayed by his fellow alliance member and killed again.
However, his seething rage wouldn’t be wasted. A blinding flash illuminated Xin’s eyes as he was reborn again with the new name Razvan Alden. This time instead of modern humans, spacefaring mecha-wielding humans, or martial cultivators. Magus dominated his new world! Once again, he would conquer this world of Magus to fight the Horde!
Follow Raz as he attempts to unite and conquer the Magus world to defeat the Horde!
Warning: This novel starts off quite slow and is not for those who do not enjoy world-building.
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You did a really good job with this novel so far! The only thing really bringing down my rating is the stability updates which I can't really give a rating on since it's only 3 chapters. The writing quality is really great all though I do wish you wouldn't tell me what is being felt so much. You're doing REALLY well with descriptions so I don't think you need to add it in. I can already feel what you're trying to portray and that's really my only gripe with your writing. There were a few mistakes but mostly words that got cut off as you were writing. For example things like: ca (instead of can) or worl (instead of world) which I think is really minor and not necessarily any indication of your writing skill. I felt like it's going at a good pace so far and I was given a good amount of things to have been wondering, "What's going to happen here?" "How is this going to pan out?" but also "Wow a lot is happening in this chapter!" Your character descriptions were wonderful and your descriptions of the world around your characters was also really well done. So good job author! Keep it up!
Can you describe your MC?Is there romance? Please no because it always hold back the MC 😒
I really the author's world building. The description of the setting was really vivid, and the character development is already very good. I love the MC already
Reading the two lines of the first chapter, I already know it holds so much potential from the get-go. Not only the synopsis has a great premise, but also the first chapter that hooks the readers to get engaged throughout the story. Overall, its a recommended novel from the best authors I know. Good job, Kakashi!
While it isn't a novel premise, this book has earned enough merit to be worth adding to my library. I recommend trying out at least a few chapters. The quality is far above the decent average, and the author's naming sense stands out immediately. The terms seem well researched and sound nice, which are definitely a plus if I'm about to dive into action where people shout out their techniques. ) The first chapters were very well paced, and the rebirth neither too tedious to go through nor skipped altogether. As with pretty much everything, the author balanced the elements well. From pacing, to the amount of details, action and dialogue, it's easy on the eyes and a pleasure to read. Good luck.
Whatever I say doesn't do the justice to the novel. The novel is extremely well written. The pacing of story is well done, we glimpse upon the beauty of the story. The characters that sing to a vast tale ahead is just sweet. The concept is fantastic, and without a doubt the author will not leave a room to do an injustice to the story. If you are reading this review I 100% recommend this novel. And this is me being fan for this new novel.
Being a cultivation novel, im going to put the plot aside for now, as there's not much been shown. The writing quality is solid, not like that makes me think twice to read it. Smooth flow! Great! The update stability, despite being a new novel, the author had shown a good direction toward a consistent update each day. Nice and keep it up! Overall, this has a solid foundation, the only thing that it need is to keep the quality and keep on writing, good luck!
Not gonna lie this really has some Supreme Magus vibes into it, but executed much better in terms of character engagement and comba graphics! Author should keep up the good work… Looking forward to this piece hitting 1k words!
The author did a good job and I basically enjoyed reading this book. I will continue to follow the updates and hope for more chapters. [img=recommend]
I am leaving the review after reading all the available chapters. The first chapter is where one hooks the reader and I think the author has done a pretty amazing job of writing a very intriguing and interesting first chapter. The story is developing at a perfect pace and I must say the author has an impeccable grasp of grammar. I didn't find even a single mistake which is highly unlikely showing how dedicated the writer is regarding his work. The ML is quirky and funny and after everything that transpired in the first chapter, I can't wait to see how his development goes. Overall, it's going to be a very interesting book so if you are into cultivation novels then give it a go. I wish the author the best of luck with his book, I hope he reaches new heights of success with this one 👍
Solid story so far, really enjoyed the first chapter and it has be locked in! Really can’t Wait to see what you do next! Keep it up
This novel seems like a well written one. There are no clear grammatical errors in the chapters so far and the storytelling/worldbuilding seems quite solid. I would definitely give this novel a chance and a read as there seems to be a clear effort to put out some quality work.