Call me Cas! I’m very casual about it… I only read fantasy. I only write fantasy. I only support fantasy.
2020-10-30 Joined Global
Borderline poetic depiction of the xianxia theme, fleshed out with an above average grammar. The story and the main plot I mean, doesn’t leave much to guess and work the head about. Nonetheless, precisely as we, as readers, can see a clear goal when it comes to the direction of the plot… I can say that the author is doing great when it comes to providing us with a sense of fulfillment when things we aspired to presict do come to reality. Though generic overall, this book does have different colors to its world… Definitely worth giving it a read and earning a spot as one of the early, OGs in an upcoming heavy fan base.
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I’m not going to complete this book anytime soon because I’m still trying to grasp the LitRPG style of writing. In the meantime, check my new book on my other accout, as I would love your feedback! Azazel: The Disgraced Monarch
ch 0 2 Vocation
Games · CasuallyPolite
I’m not going to complete this book anytime soon because I’m still trying to grasp the LitRPG style of writing. In the meantime, check my new book on my other accout, as I would love your feedback! Azazel: The Disgraced Monarch
ch 63 Arduous Battle
Games · CasuallyPolite
I’m not going to complete this book anytime soon because I’m still trying to grasp the LitRPG style of writing. In the meantime, check my new book on my other accout, as I would love your feedback! Azazel: The Disgraced Monarch
ch 65 Obstructed
Games · CasuallyPolite
😂😂😭
"Tall. Well, tall enough."
Fantasy · TheHatedAuthor
No s*it Sherlock! Our boy is smart, already realized that on his own -.-
"Welcome to my water prism," an ominous voice sang. "A divine place where guests can eat, breathe, and talk but never leave…"
Fantasy · TheHatedAuthor
A mini sandbox universe :0
"I can speak, and I can breathe," he said in confusion. "But I can't leave this box-like structure?"
Fantasy · TheHatedAuthor
People be a little different when wet 😳
"Oh! It's Karl!" he said with a relieved sigh. "Man, don't scare me like that. You look totally different in the water LMAO."
Fantasy · TheHatedAuthor
Okay now that’s what a nerd with no charm at all would say… Face is everyting to girls
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Fantasy · TheHatedAuthor
They obviously want to go around applying lotion to women while preaching their faith for it…
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Fantasy · TheHatedAuthor
It’s called playing hard to get! Get that in your books
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Fantasy · TheHatedAuthor
The novel has quite the bumpy start with occasional typos and constant perspective switches. However, things quickly fall in line as the author reveals bits and pieces of the plot, events, and character interactions. There is little to be said about world building as this book features generic urban fantasty in addition to a player’s system. The little irony that a game character is now a player in the real world gives some food for thought, and I wonder if the author might introduce parallel realities down the line. The consistent perspective switch makes one feel as though no character is the main per se, but everyting eventually revolves around Rayn in one way or another. I’ve always liked harem stories, but I must say the romance in this one needs a lot of fine tuning. The psychological works at play, together with cheats such as charm, ruin the entire point of romance… It would be better if the MC outright hypnotizes the females instead of playing two faced and commiting deciet. All in all, I give this book 3/5, maleable for change depending on future progress!
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It’s always the old man! Sigh…
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Fantasy · Kakashi_PCB
Yeah, short flat chested girls aren’t meant for the battlefield!
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Fantasy · Kakashi_PCB
This is the kind of book you get into when you get the urge to read something ‘Different’ for a change. Not so bad writing, surely promising plot line, and the frequently, popular system that we all love. (Great cheat codes.) Support the author so he doesn’t drop this book immaturely…
Eternal life begins with saving my clan
Eastern · _EverSmile