Naruto: My Ninja Way

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Myron_Harris

I love this book so far, it explores being the actual shadow of the hokage and I find that fascinating especially in this time period of konoha where so much can change. The only problem I would have is the updates which are far apart but I can’t complain because the chapters are so great in quality.

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MalKenDov

5 stars because of how fast you killed off danzo without making the MC super duper kage god lvl at 5 or something.besides that my only nitpick is that feel like the sentence structure and wording/Grammer could use a little work. other than that great job writing this. hope you continue this

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SleepySmile

Love it original idea good writing we judt need more chapter and it will be perfect

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aswsok

Template book. What I didn't like is that the main character chews everything up for Minato. That is, he helped him with training, helped him find a teacher, taught him the rasengan. Minato's development as a character is lacking.

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SecondFastestSperm

🌟🌟🌟✴️ 3.8. The story is pretty good. Grammar is also good. Although, there are some long a*s paragraph sometimes, not much of a problem really. Just could use some little work. The thing that's not my taste really is the system. More specifically the store, the mc can buy powers that's not from the Naruto world. It breaks the world building and immersion. The mc and the story development is also a little naïve, or idealistic if I would say. The mc got everything handed down to him. He doesn't have any problems. Just relies on Dues Ex Machina . I'm not saying that it's bad, but it's just not my taste. Good luck though. There are probably people that like this. So keep it up.

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AC_F5

genius work for a FF.. some things looks a bit fast paced with how things are going.. but I like it mabye you can put more details or flesh out certain parts.. making the chapters a bit longer..on an other note I hope you can do something so Mito survives the bijuu transfer and making her live longer..

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LeonardoDiCaprio1

nice work please update from time to time

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Sensibly_Lazy

I am liking this novel so far.My power stones are reserved for this.I hope you don't drop this novel, Author.

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11_8_33

really, good and fun to read, but it does have some grammar issues I don't know if I'm in a good mood or something but I quickly ignored it. it also has fun and unique ideas for a naruto fanfic.

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Majeh7

great work keep it up............................................................................................................................

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pingvinchik

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Idealist

There are not so many chapters. but the potential is so frightening

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DumbWeeb11

Its Good...........................................................69

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Cindy_Davis_5782

I love this pleae don drop it 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

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TDWSF

Story is just very good.I have written a comment on the last chapter and everything I could have written is already in the comment.Please check it.

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Jordi_Hardiansyah

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