/ Fantasy / The darkness inside.
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follow her... or yourself through the mist, try to understand what the writer has wrote because its a mystery with in her mind.
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The author is so poetic, that every chapter is filled with a riddle, a cryptic puzzle that needs to be cracked. The chapters are small but don't underestimate the weight of the story to be small too. The rich use of symbolism, hyperbole, and hard-hitting quotes just makes this story so interesting. PS. keep a tissue box with you at all times, very important! This novella needs all the recognition it deserves, hopefully, there could be a sequel to this in the form of a novel, diving deep into the character's relationship with their inner child, and how they would heal. Awesome story, kudos to the author!
very well written so far. its not fiction nor reality by what I can tell but it sure does tell a story weirdly i relate to it which I normally don't so for me this was definitely a first for me can't wait for the new chapter! ^^
so far so good! this is underrated tbh please release more chapters i want to know what happens next! :] this is quite relatable and you portray that in an enticing way!
This is a very nice story with interesting scenes, though the novel is short, it is worth reading. 🥰🥰🥰 I also hope to read more from the author ☺️
In each chapter, the author's poetic brilliance is evident, skillfully crafting a tapestry of enigmatic riddles and cryptic puzzles that beckon to be unraveled. The inner dialogue of the characters is brilliantly portrayed, adding a touch of insanity to the tale. However, for readers less familiar with poetry, a background story or explanation could be beneficial to fully appreciate the nuances within the narrative. Despite this minor wish, the overall experience remains a captivating journey into the realm of literary artistry. Keep it up dear author!
The story is cool. So far so good! Please release more chapters i want to know what happens next! It's an interesting setup for the book. Please continue writing it.
What can highlight a good transfer of thoughts. But the problem is that the chapters are as short as possible (I see this for the first time). Even if it's a story. What was written below about 3k and 4k words in a chapter so few write. Basically, write 2k and 1.5k per chapter. You need at least 1k in each chapter and add plot directly to that story.
Since its in a short form, it has great potential and I like how it's building up its character and surrounding. I apologize for the misunderstanding it as a novel.
pretty good right now. I rlly enjoy the story but I still need more chapters to see how it ends
nice to find an actual good story when ur reading all these other same thing and different scenarios kinda stories its nice to finally read something i can relate to the and the enigmatic poetry of this author is impeccable. you have done us teens poetic justice keep going!
hey! I'm the writer of this story its kind of real but gets fictional in certain areas as if u are using your imagination. im writing this review here so that the readers know that these are my thoughts its nothing crazy though it is tragic that these thoughts lurk inside a teenagers head read it maybe you find it relatable i mean everybody is just surviving at this point. A.Z.F