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What if you spend your whole life like a vegetable in a hospital bed? Only being able to speak and listen. Just that. Would you go crazy? Unbalanced? What if it was all the fault of a degenerate madman looking for his parents' inheritance? Would you be angry? Would you be mentally broken?
That was Kayden's life for 20 years and as quickly as it started, it ended, but luckily for him, reincarnation existed and by some miracle, he still had his memories of it. And....his new world had...magic.
In the first moment of consciousness, Kayden made a promise to himself, in this life, he would achieve everything, he would reach the height of power, he wouldn't give a damn about women or money, futile things that would condemn him to mediocrity, his focus was to have the power to rule his destiny, this time he would not be a slave to his own life, he would be a monarch.
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The book brims with immense potential, captivating the reader with its well-executed time skips that are both coherent and comprehensible. Nonetheless, I recommend keeping an eye out for a few minor grammatical errors that can be easily rectified. Your talent as an author shines through, and I encourage you to persist in your excellent work!
This book successfully bridges the gap between entertainment and profundity. It is a gripping narrative filled with multidimensional characters that the reader cannot help but root for. The plot unravels with surprising twists and heartwarming moments that keep the reader engrossed till the very end. The author's command over language enhances the storytelling, creating vivid imagery and stirring emotions. The characters' evolution feels authentic, reflecting the complexities of real-life relationships. Moreover, the book explores meaningful themes with subtlety and depth, making the reader pause and reflect. It's a seamless blend of impactful storytelling and intellectual stimulation, undoubtedly meriting a 5-star rating.
I’ve just started this book but so far it has a strong beginning. The pace is good and apart from a few minor grammatical errors the writing quality is also solid. Will await more chapters!
First of all, you can write your author's notes at the end of the chapter or there's a section for it since I expected to get into the story once I opened the chapter. Secondly, there were few of grammars mistakes which I pointed out in the comments section so I hope that could help. I suggest you to proofread again since there were some confusion, imo.
I feel the first and second chapters are written very differently from the otheers I also feel you might wantt to improve the world setting Overall I love your storyline and I kno wit's going to be a really great book at the end of the day.......Keep on writing!!!!
idk why am so invested in this novel and wrote too many comments than normal . Novel is still have baked though from my reading experience (read till 119). If author is interested I would like to have a conversation with u
I have read 150 chapters, and though the story is interesting and well thought out(only minor plotholes) the writing quality is bad, especially when it comes to keeping the gender the same and names for realms(kingdoms? idk). I have not read a single chapter that has not made the mistake of either saying "...boy.. something" and then in the same paragraf refer to him as her or where kingdoms are called realms, or realms called kingdoms.
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first if all if you looking for villain you have found the wrong place the MC is not villain at the start or 150 in the future.the MC has attachments with friends and orphanage that limit the MC to neutral I would say.despite the words the athour uses the MC is not inhuman,it's very much human. the power system I'm not a fan,I'm not really interested in concepts without backing of laws,greed is prime example of things done right I Also don't like the plot armour the MC has and the authors avoidance to write something truly dark (torture season), also the revenge thing will never lead to a villain it always ends back to attachments. the updates are often though,but the quality so wasted potential of character,world that functions around the MC, seriously why did the noble not kill him when had chance,saving future problems.defenitly not villain the MC does not have the mentally for it.power system that simply is not good,concepts.the MC looks like the classic MC where people don't kill the MC when they have the chance even though the MC.the MC can't information private that should be private,that us dangerous for example eden.the updates are often but it does not offer quality
The writing style is easy to follow, and the pacing is just right. The author has also done an excellent job of setting the tone of the story, making it both emotional and thought-provoking i like the unique plot and characters.
Quite an interesting read, I really like how the story is styled like a diary. The first 2 chapters were indeed written worse than the rest of the story, like the author themselves stated at the beginning. I think it would not hurt to make some improvements there. I also noticed in the first chapter, a switch from 3rd to 1st person perspective, which was a bit strange. But what I really like is the feeling of loneliness while the MC was at the hospital, as well as the appearance of magic in the story.
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I liked the way you are writing your novel. And it is simplified. And your novel chapters contain good amount of words which I personally like more about a novel. It has great potential too. I wish to see the world background more detailed it will surely put some life into the novel.
Hello, this is my first comment on my novel, I'm going to redo the first 3 chapters, they are in a much lower quality, please don't give up before them