An Unlikely Combination [Marvel/ Dc/ Dragon Ball]

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HeavenlyDemonJoker

I finished reading the first chapter and it looks very promising I will try to give power stones every day so please keep writing and don't drop

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Benoit_Valtin

as a comment says I stop at chapter 20 it's much too fast in terms of feelings it smells like putaclic the basic novel for a harem it's fast food and yet there is something to do at the beginning

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funmaxwell

This story has a novel idea but it's written badly. The story is filled with grammar issues to the point it's hard to read but not unreadable. the worst offense the story commits is the leaps in logic it commits. one example from the story The main character describes himself as pretty much the typical Saiyan in appearance except for his eye color and then immediately jumps too the conclusion he's a half breed. the problem with this is no one could be sure that's an impossible trait for a pure-blooded Saiyans to have and it should have made it suspect and not conclusive until he displayed his Kryptonian powers. this was a minor one and the worst logic leap in the story is when Bruce Wayne's father's friend finds out the main character is an alien by using 1980s internet and a satellite like it was posted on his Facebook in 1980 which shouldn't exist for like another two decades or so. as there's so much wrong with this one leaping in logic in the story I don't even know where to begin to break it down. first off no one's going to post their alien from outer space publicly or keep that type of information on any open database as that would be stupid. so it should have been completely impossible for Bruce's Dad's friend to Divine out the main character was an alien 👽. as he should have at most just found a family registry because apparently he also finds out he was adopted like Superman. what it shouldn't have been able to find was his entire life story. as the internet and what information it kept on people would have been very basic. if the author wanted MC information revealed he should have made Bruce's father's friend madam Xanadu and not this convoluted b******* with the internet and a satellite because that's not how it works and there's tons of things wrong with it.

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Zack_Smith_9438

An Enjoyable story, at least for me. The grammar is a lot better than what I expected it to be, and there is a lot of twists and turns I didn't expect...for those of you whom hate Overpowered characters this might not be for you, but there is more to the story than the mc's power.

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AwokenShawn

After reading the current chapters this looks very promising if u keep going in the direction your going so don’t drop this I’ m tryna see the end of the story