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Solo tengo cosas, buenas que decir... Me encanta la temática Buen desarrollo Personaje interesante Si acaso la parte de la herencia se está estancando un poco y la esposa del protagonista ha ido desapareciendo pero en general bien
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I binge the whole story in three days. about 400 chapters, and I can say for certain that this is one of my favorite rags to riches fic, the fact that the writing is immersing and engaging. nothing is boring, and while I'd love to have a more depth or quantity of chapters regarding the impact of specific games/technologies, I could understand that you'd want to have a faster pace.
Dark souls? ☝️🤓 ......................................................................................................................................
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I don't know what to say, this story is great in all aspects. It's the perfect balance between progress and detail. The pace is great and the characters are as fleshed out as they could be considering this story is more focused on video games and Kishin.
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love! love! love! hope this continues for a very long time. I actually learnt stuff about video game from this that when I came across a video on yt about the history of video game and guess stuff base on the novel I actually got it right, I felt so semi included in the conversation my older brothers were having😭😭😂😂
so many info dump and no mc progress low character/story development so pls author almost chapter that i read are about the experience of the costumer
Binged around 150 Chaps all night before stopping. It was very good at first but then the plot becomes repetitive and the pacing became too fast which robbed that good experience I felt in the early chaps.If I have if honest I truly enjoyed the so called 'filler' slife of life chapters you stopped making after a certain point, its gives depth to the character and could have been another plot point to avoid the repetitiveness of the business side. Like you could have explored Mira's life in college and how her relationship with the mc impacted her life there. The reactions of the classmates? How did the treatment of her change when he donated a sum of money to the school? Perhaps you can have some male student attempt to 'flirt' her and how she rejects it and then follwed by the mc showing him that she is his. There is a lot of aspects in his relationship with not only with Mira but also her parents, her sister, his sisters, and etc. There's a lot of plotpoint that could have been explored. These things had a lot of potential that would give depth to your characters. Making them more relatable and easy to sympathize with. But we barely get any of it and then at certain point completely stopped it.There also the problem where you repeatedly told a scene instead of showing it. Like they said "Show not Tell". You did it right with the buying of the marriage ring. You showed us, instead of just saying "He bought an elegant ring" and leave it at that.I believe it was a bad move when you stopped making the so called 'filler' slice-of-slife chaps after the marriage chapter. Those where the things that I enjoyed and helped avoid the reptitiveness of the business side. So much potential but was not explored.Hope this helps you improve author. I geniunely enjoyed reading this book.
This novel certainly amazing when i see it on ranking board, i thought why don't give a try and i got hooked by this novel.This novel is true about its title focus on game, but as novel progress its more into entertainment such as anime, manga and music.If you want to read about novel that focus on developing mc passion its for yours.Fyi this novel lack of romance so don't expect much and mc and heroine develop their feelings fast
Estaba bueno pero los ultimos 15 o 20 capitulos son muy decepcionantes por baje mucho la calidad y estoy pensando en dejarlo y no solo yo muchas personas lo van a dejar
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262 chapters. Well, at the beginning it’s really 1 in 1 like another familiar work. But after 20 chapters the plot slowly takes a different path (albeit similar). Paragraphs are often repeated, there was a lot of water for 1 chapter, a lot of plot holes (which after 150 + you don’t pay attention at all anymore). But overall, I read it, didn’t give up, there will be a continuation (at least 40-60 chapters), I’ll come back and read it. And yes, thank you)
So far so good, no drama no life threatening events yet ,the heroine is not the same as the My Hollywood System fanfic. Overall a good Business empire creation fic
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It's a Really Good Read, with a very nice Development - and an impressive world background. I Must say this story is truly positive🤞 - The Names used in for Company, dude I Love it✨
the first few chapter is almost copied and past from the cn novel but if you don't mind the first chapters the author writes a really good plot with good character development. He only has one piece of plot armor so far so I like the story
Muito bom, sinceramente nunca vi uma história dessa com o MC ser Tycoon, gostei muito ótimo desenvolvimento da história do personagens, a atualização dos episódios é boa demais é bem estabilidade. Eu índico essa história para vocês.
Fun read to pass the time with your brain shut off, but I still think that the original chinese video game tycoon is better (if reading through mtl is bearable). After the opening chapters it does become a different story so it's still enjoyable. There are some negatives, like some decisions the mc make do not make any sense. There are also some unrealistic parts about release dates, marketing and competitors (for example only starting marketing 3 weeks before the movie was released). Some characters were also pretty cliche, like his whole family hating him for no apparent reason, apart from the grandpa, he is great! Pretty good overall, great writing quality and stable updates, would recommend
For those planning to read it, glance read through the early chapters as they are rather forced and the grammer is all over the place. Now, this novel has a rather interesting concept and has been progressing really well. There are holes here and there but overall it's a good fic. Only thing bugging me is the grammer and how forced it was in the early chapters
The story is quite good and the writing quality is also not bad.The only downside is that whenever the MC introduces a new game,anime or movie 2 to 3 chapters just go into introduction of game or anime or movie.Its like watching a written gameplay or written anime and movie,Because of that you would be compelled to skip quite a few chapters because those chapters have only dialogues of anime or movie.
Amazing story I hope this will continue to receive some love from the readers and author.
Solo tengo cosas, buenas que decir... Me encanta la temática Buen desarrollo Personaje interesante Si acaso la parte de la herencia se está estancando un poco y la esposa del protagonista ha ido desapareciendo pero en general bien
Please continue this story *)[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I binge the whole story in three days. about 400 chapters, and I can say for certain that this is one of my favorite rags to riches fic, the fact that the writing is immersing and engaging. nothing is boring, and while I'd love to have a more depth or quantity of chapters regarding the impact of specific games/technologies, I could understand that you'd want to have a faster pace.
Dark souls? ☝️🤓 ......................................................................................................................................
5 stars because I like how instead of just reading, you started writing[img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend] [img=recommend]
I don't know what to say, this story is great in all aspects. It's the perfect balance between progress and detail. The pace is great and the characters are as fleshed out as they could be considering this story is more focused on video games and Kishin.
A good story must be 5 stars[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
love! love! love! hope this continues for a very long time. I actually learnt stuff about video game from this that when I came across a video on yt about the history of video game and guess stuff base on the novel I actually got it right, I felt so semi included in the conversation my older brothers were having😭😭😂😂
so many info dump and no mc progress low character/story development so pls author almost chapter that i read are about the experience of the costumer
Binged around 150 Chaps all night before stopping. It was very good at first but then the plot becomes repetitive and the pacing became too fast which robbed that good experience I felt in the early chaps.If I have if honest I truly enjoyed the so called 'filler' slife of life chapters you stopped making after a certain point, its gives depth to the character and could have been another plot point to avoid the repetitiveness of the business side. Like you could have explored Mira's life in college and how her relationship with the mc impacted her life there. The reactions of the classmates? How did the treatment of her change when he donated a sum of money to the school? Perhaps you can have some male student attempt to 'flirt' her and how she rejects it and then follwed by the mc showing him that she is his. There is a lot of aspects in his relationship with not only with Mira but also her parents, her sister, his sisters, and etc. There's a lot of plotpoint that could have been explored. These things had a lot of potential that would give depth to your characters. Making them more relatable and easy to sympathize with. But we barely get any of it and then at certain point completely stopped it.There also the problem where you repeatedly told a scene instead of showing it. Like they said "Show not Tell". You did it right with the buying of the marriage ring. You showed us, instead of just saying "He bought an elegant ring" and leave it at that.I believe it was a bad move when you stopped making the so called 'filler' slice-of-slife chaps after the marriage chapter. Those where the things that I enjoyed and helped avoid the reptitiveness of the business side. So much potential but was not explored.Hope this helps you improve author. I geniunely enjoyed reading this book.
This novel certainly amazing when i see it on ranking board, i thought why don't give a try and i got hooked by this novel.This novel is true about its title focus on game, but as novel progress its more into entertainment such as anime, manga and music.If you want to read about novel that focus on developing mc passion its for yours.Fyi this novel lack of romance so don't expect much and mc and heroine develop their feelings fast
Estaba bueno pero los ultimos 15 o 20 capitulos son muy decepcionantes por baje mucho la calidad y estoy pensando en dejarlo y no solo yo muchas personas lo van a dejar
Reveal Spoiler 262 chapters. Well, at the beginning it’s really 1 in 1 like another familiar work. But after 20 chapters the plot slowly takes a different path (albeit similar). Paragraphs are often repeated, there was a lot of water for 1 chapter, a lot of plot holes (which after 150 + you don’t pay attention at all anymore). But overall, I read it, didn’t give up, there will be a continuation (at least 40-60 chapters), I’ll come back and read it. And yes, thank you)
So far so good, no drama no life threatening events yet ,the heroine is not the same as the My Hollywood System fanfic. Overall a good Business empire creation fic
whhhhhhyyyyaaaaarrrrrrruuuu rrreeeeddiiiingggthiiiiisRrrrreeeeeevviiiiiiiewwwwwGoooo Reeeaaadd Goooddd ssstuuifff[img=update]
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It's a Really Good Read, with a very nice Development - and an impressive world background. I Must say this story is truly positive🤞 - The Names used in for Company, dude I Love it✨
the first few chapter is almost copied and past from the cn novel but if you don't mind the first chapters the author writes a really good plot with good character development. He only has one piece of plot armor so far so I like the story
Muito bom, sinceramente nunca vi uma história dessa com o MC ser Tycoon, gostei muito ótimo desenvolvimento da história do personagens, a atualização dos episódios é boa demais é bem estabilidade. Eu índico essa história para vocês.
Fun read to pass the time with your brain shut off, but I still think that the original chinese video game tycoon is better (if reading through mtl is bearable). After the opening chapters it does become a different story so it's still enjoyable. There are some negatives, like some decisions the mc make do not make any sense. There are also some unrealistic parts about release dates, marketing and competitors (for example only starting marketing 3 weeks before the movie was released). Some characters were also pretty cliche, like his whole family hating him for no apparent reason, apart from the grandpa, he is great! Pretty good overall, great writing quality and stable updates, would recommend
For those planning to read it, glance read through the early chapters as they are rather forced and the grammer is all over the place. Now, this novel has a rather interesting concept and has been progressing really well. There are holes here and there but overall it's a good fic. Only thing bugging me is the grammer and how forced it was in the early chapters
The story is quite good and the writing quality is also not bad.The only downside is that whenever the MC introduces a new game,anime or movie 2 to 3 chapters just go into introduction of game or anime or movie.Its like watching a written gameplay or written anime and movie,Because of that you would be compelled to skip quite a few chapters because those chapters have only dialogues of anime or movie.
Amazing story I hope this will continue to receive some love from the readers and author.