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In the bustling city of Starcity, where modern science and technology reign supreme, a resilient orphan named Lucien defies all odds to rise to the top of the prestigious Alderbrook University. He's a double major in Business Management and Science, armed with an unparalleled intellect and unwavering determination. However, his intellect and superior mindset also causes bitterness among his peers.
As Lucien approaches the final exam, his academic excellence becomes a catalyst for relentless bullying. Envious classmates subject him to a brutal physical assault that leaves him battered and on the brink of death. In his darkest hour, just as hope slips away, an extraordinary turn of events unfolds. The ring on his hand that he got from his parents started to shine, and his head began ringing, he felt unbearable pain, but after several minutes it was all gone. Suddenly a holographic screen appeared before his eyes and he finally understood what happened. He wasn't going crazy or dying, no, he actually got a system.
With this enigmatic system as his guide, he embarks on a journey to not only survive, but to seek retribution by becoming the wealthiest man in the world. He wanted to stand above all and never be looked down upon again.
In a society driven by cutting-edge technology and ambition, Lucien's quest for success and vengeance begins. With his newfound abilities, he stands poised to reshape the world as we know it.
Discover the secrets hidden within the system as Lucien's journey unfolds, blurring the lines between science and ambition in "The System of Prosperity: The Ring of Wisdom".
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It is completely fictional and not based on a real story, so do not take it too seriously.
It is my first novel and will be something like a prototype, so if you want anything included you can write me, and I will try to incorporate it into this story.
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It's not a bad novel, but the issue is there are so many unnecessary details that I doubt anyone reads. lengthy descriptions on an apartment building taking up more than a chapter, sooo much introspection with lengthy thought processes. etc.If there was more actual story, I probably would have rated this 5 stars.
The novel is good but it doesn’t go with me it has potential but to make a mc one of the most stupid person on earth with 30 IQ is overboard because he ask to many questions and comes with plans that are to stupid and acts stupid he’s like a child that it age is 9 and ask the system many questions with the name of the skill or ability and even what leveling is that not something a mc with 30 IQ should he doesn’t have logic ability at all that why I well put this as a low rating novel well like I said this has potential so I well see When the time comes sorry for the spelling.
The descriptions are too long, like, I literally skipped half a chapter, and the description was still going on, and when I skipped a chapter, it didn't matter, because it didn't matter to the story, you feel me? The conversations are also unnatural like AIs are talking to each other. I'm almost certain that this is written by AI.
Dear Readers, I'd like to begin by expressing my heartfelt gratitude to all of you for taking the time to read my first novel. This journey so far, has been a significant learning experience for me, and every support that I can get is appreciated. As I reflect on the chapters I've written so far, I acknowledge that there are still many areas where I've room for improvement. One of my key takeaways is that I often tend to delve into unneeded thought processes and provide info dumps that, upon reflection, are more extensive than necessary. I'm committed to addressing this and ensuring a more streamlined and engaging reading experience moving forward. Starting with the 17th chapter, my focus will shift towards a deeper exploration of the storyline. I've recognized that some readers may find the initial part of the novel too immersed in descriptions, and I appreciate your patience. The upcoming chapters will prioritize storytelling. I've still got many ideas for the rest of the novel, and I sincerely hope that you'll continue this journey with me. My aim is to ensure that these ideas don't get overshadowed by lengthy descriptions, and I'm determined to make the narrative more captivating and exciting. Once again, I want to say that your feedback and criticism are invaluable to me as I strive to make this novel the best it can be. I'm committed to learning and growing with every chapter, and your insights will play a significant role in this process. Thank you for joining me on this adventure, and I look forward to hearing your thoughts and making this novel better with each new chapter. With sincere appreciation, Easy, Your Author
I think this is a very good novel which has a system, but i think some changes have to be made while writing it. First of all, There are too many details about the rewards. while I appreciate the info, it can be a little dialed down and still perfectly fine. I think I would rate this a solid 9.5/10 and am expecting more chapters in the future. hope you don't drop it.