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So I was going to write a review when it had a little chapters but I waited for a little more like 40 more but this is taking long for the update so I give my thoughts on this novel it’s good there nothing that makes this novel bad the main character is someone who thinks before he does something and he not like other he is a very clam character the background is good don’t know much about it but it’s good and the writing is the best so give it a try the only thing that’s bad is that it takes to long to update chapters hope this gets better.

I know that giving only two star is bad but am in just two chapters and I can’t read anymore the reason is how the author makes the mc talk which is annoying the mc is to surprise about and he doesn’t question what happened or what he doing but just get into the system like it’s a normal thing the way he talks is like a 13 years old kid. So what the author could improve is the way you introduce and the characters way of talking I don’t like how he just get to things and forget and goes back to it and forget everything else which is just not good anyway you can still improve you should read you own work to see what your writing and read a different author works to get some ideas of what you did worng with it or you can see what good on a novel and read the comments be it good or bad which will help a lot.

Okay i got to say that this novel really surprises me the novel is good the background is good to some extent but not bad the main character is really good there isn’t any mistakes I think but this got me hooked will there still only 14 chapters so this is only from what I got I still don’t know what the main character will do in this life I was thinking of kingdom building or whatever the author thinks about but I’m okay with it theirs no harem or many others characters that are useless and the power system the mc has is cool there isn’t much of the system but it’s okay.

I got to say that the author did a good job about the mc he is smart and has wisdom which what I like about I just hope that the author doesn’t change his story and come up with a harem I do have some questions is their any relationship that the mc will have with only one person or is there harem which if it is I have a reason to not waste my time reading it I hope the author updated more because I love this novel oh and the author should stick with mc making the kingdom better instead of mc doing unrelated stuff ya mc could fight other kingdoms or mc making technology better.

Okay so what I don’t like about this novel from the 7 chapters I read so far not much but I will only read till this because it was a turn off so let go back mc is a AI which looks good and I was really looking forward to because I have never read about a AI going back in time I did see that there would be superpowers in this one I thought that this novel would be different from others because mc is a AI goes back in time it’s a different world that it’s about to have powers okay that’s good but what was really a turn off is that the author decided to make the Ai a human where he makes his own body with the technology from the future that still good but I thought that the author would put some technology in the body like an eyes that is robot something like that but no that was fine I guess the author has plans for the story but the next second when he gets his body it was mention that he forgot his future technology all that just to forget that the mc is not a Ai anymore but a human with some intelligence and can live long this is basically a mc from the future and goes back and has future knowledge but can’t use it because the author thought it’s too op okay what author did was not good he mention that the reason he does not have his future knowledge is because in the progress in his su$c$de he destroyed all his knowledge which makes a little sense if it wasn’t because the mc still had knowledge when he made his body because that’s from the future I didn’t like it and I know some people didn’t like it either but what I give the author credit it was good for just 7 chapters at least but if you want to read it just forget that’s his a Ai and just a human the novel is still good it’s just the same but different starts. I forgot to mention that the author forgets to mention a lot of parts of the story in detail he sometimes have to explain in the comments.

Okay this novel is good i give the author credit but I do have some problems first it’s the mc for a person who was a mercenary he is afraid of someone killing him but for me I see mercenary as person that they already know that they well die in battle ya they could have considered but not that afraid. Second i don’t like how mc is nice to everyone that he meet I know that he is trying to fix his reputation but I feel that it’s a little boring other then that I see that the novel has potential I hope the mc get strong fast because of his past life experience and since he was a mercenary he will not have a problem to k$ll someone without mercy

I got to say that this novel was good but it got bad between chapter 15 I have not gone through more chapters but I just didn’t like how the author made the story and plot. I like to say that this novel was made with ChatGPT or not because of how the author made the story which seems like it was made from ChatGPT. One reason is because repeated words another thing that I see is that the story changes sometimes I think I don’t know if it’s me but it feels that the plot changes for some reasons. This novel had potential but I just feel that it was not the type of novel that I like. Now let talk about what I thought the novel was going to be about first I thought that the novel was going to be of how mc becomes stronger which he does but not the way I thought I thought that it was mc alone and trying to become stronger by himself and get some human friends along the way that would make sense but the novel didn’t do that it became more of how mc spends his time eating for 15 chapters straight till his mother got to a fight with another dragon which she decide to leave her child by themselves there 3 of them which makes the mc and his siblings run away and survive alone without a mother. Now that when it gets bad mc starts to act like a mc that trying to become a hero for some reason let me give you a story okay so mc runs away found a home with his sibling then they get hungry so the sibling decided that they should go hunt for food but mc say that it was not a good idea but they still did now they went to get food that when they get trap by werewolf while mc looked from afar while his siblings were catcher this was a lesson for them say the mc because of how they act now that this is going on mc starts to take action because his siblings knows what they did wrong but I just didn’t like the fact that when mc save them he starts to talk to his enemy and says “What are you trying to do” which sounds cringe as hell that’s because he’s already know what’s happening there was no need for that but after that mc try’s to look strong just to make them his servant something like that I can’t spell what I want so this well do anyway this was a big disappointment for me of how this novel turn out.

I know that I didn’t misunderstood but it’s like a friend relationship but if the girl is going to be annoying in the novel I just can’t stand it it’s one of my mind things that I can’t stand about in novel sorry about that you do you I well maybe pick this up and make another review when the novel has more chapters not saying that the novel is bad I like it

The story was good and all but once the girl came I was unfortunately less interested in the story not because I don’t want the mc to have a relationship it’s because how the girl was introduced which give me a bad expression about her I know that there only 10 chapters and all but it got ruined fast for me The reason that is because how the girl fell in love with the mc only because he is strong I really don’t want to read about how a girl that hates the mc from the beginning and fell in love with the mc because he was strong it’s like a woman hates the poor but loves the rich you get it I’m not saying that the girl is at fault but the author that thought that it was a good idea for a relationship to start you have to think about it from your point of view well you love a girl that only sees your strength and money or a girl that love you for who you are from the start without any benefit but only love you Anyways it was good from the start but got ruined for me the author should have just written a love story with the girl that took him there instead it’s was more interesting I had high hopes for that when I read it or a girl that he meets that has high intelligence like him Don’t know about you and what you think about this novel this is my own opinion so don’t judge me just writing about what I think about the novel and some people well have the same opinions I think?