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Yo, author here. Dropped my previous novel for it's absolute trash setting, this one should align more with the generic trends, however I have a lot in plan. Enjoy!
In a world where talent determines one's destiny, Lin Jian, an ordinary mid-talent cultivator, yearns for greatness. A mere outer Disciple of a small sect, his life follows a predictable pattern of training and chores. But when he awakens one fateful morning to an otherworldly blue system screen, his fate takes an unexpected turn.
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If you wanna know why I gave a five stars vote then do give it a try. Agree with me it's worth it [img=recommend] Author made me want to read cultivation stories. Keep going author and also wish you all the best
One of the stories I have read that has a compelling protagonist, though it could greatly benefit from richer descriptions and greater clarity in its world-building and power system. The initial chapters may leave you wanting more but don't be too hasty to put it down. As the story progresses, it steadily improves, revealing hidden depths and layers that promise an increasingly engaging and immersive journey. The potential lies within, and if you can push past the initial uncertainty, you'll discover a tale that gradually unfolds into something truly captivating, making it well worth the investment of your time and imagination.
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Liked the idea of the system and the different cheats we've seen so far, but before the introduction of the said cheat we could've seen some world building and character introduction, how the Mc just feels on a normal day, his ambitions, his family (of he has one) his relations with other people and how and why he is in that sect. The Mc personality feel kinda bland tbh, would've really loved to see more of him at the start without cheat , seeing how much him and his peers struggle with normal cultivation would've really made me more attached to him. The fact that nobody doubted anything when he was a nobody and suddenly has a leap of strength is suspicious too, anyways loved the setting and cheat but more world building and character refining on the Mc and the other characters would be welcome
the cultivation genre is full of stories not done well but this one was pretty good. the author should continue writing and never stop, pretty good/10