"Animosity"Intense Ill will, here, the Guild.
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Oh yea, sorry, that's a mistake and a draft of my old thought, I'll have to remove that part. Thank you.
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A well-crafted novel with clear descriptions that vividly paint the world of the book. The intrigue lies in its uniqueness, particularly the twist involving the eruption that granted powers to mankind. I would give it a solid 4 stars overall.
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Welp, figured out what's wrong. Thanks for the criticism from my fellow authors. Fight scenes...
ch 0 7 The Third Trial
Fantasy · Vonnn
Haha thx for the support, I'll be writing even more now. Reviews and comments are really a writer's pleasure!
ch 0 1 Awakening.
Fantasy · Vonnn
It's pretty good, a few grammar/spelling mistakes here and there. But not one being in this world of 7 billion is perfect, even now, I may be making mistakes. Now for the story, I appreciate the slow start. It's what im very used to, and the character complexity is decent. The relationship between the girl and mc is a nice relief from the rest of the novels I've read. The only problem I have is the genre, I'm not into western fantasy nor dark fantasy. But, this is still a fun read even without being my preference.
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It's fundamental for a long novel, so yes. Not sure about harem.
Author here, I'm sure nobody will see this but anyways. For the later cultivation realms like Spirit Severing, I will try to be as creative as possible. After all, it's not satisfying with a mere "boom spirit severing now come soul integration" ;)
ch 0 1 Awakening.
Fantasy · Vonnn
Author here, the cultivation ranks will be listed here cause of a bug where I can't create an auxiliary volume. 1.Qi condensation Realm2.Foundation Establishment Realm3.Core Formation Realm4.Golden Core Formation5.Nascent Soul6.Soul Formation Realm7.Saint/Saintess Realm8.Mahayana Realm9.Tribulation Transcendence(more to come with future updates)
ch 0 1 The Beginning
Fantasy · Vonnn
It was very skibidi, very fanum tax, so far the novel is good, a little fast paced, could use some improvements, but meh, it's good. Now what I want to see is, some actual uploading, author! What is thee doing with novel of thy? This an utmost sin, 2 whole years, update!
Necropolis of the Gods
Fantasy · Shrihari_Nagesh