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The sudden appearence of the powerful adverseries leads to the ultimate event for the various protectors of the galaxy and universe at large. I hope you guys like it. It will be updated on a regular basis.
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Write a reviewhulk beating superman was just stupid superman is way stronger then him..................................................................................................
Reveal SpoilerI don't really have much to say, and it's late, so I have to sleep. But the novel is good, and I hope more people can see it that way and support the author so he doesn't just drop the novel because of the weak support that he's getting
Author Iron_Man876
3.4/5 I’ll start by saying that the descriptions are a nice change of pace from the normal FF slop. However, having flowing descriptions only works when the sentences are “flowing”. The author does not use punctuation in his sentences well, leading to sentence-paragraphs that run on for several lines without any moment of respite. I like the idea of Ben 10, Avengers, and DC crossover, but I couldn’t stand the writing. Also, retelling the same fight scene from multiple perspectives without adding anything substantially different gets boring after the 3rd time. I would rather see one or two fleshed out POVs, potentially separated into 2 chapters, than 10 POVs crumpled to fit into one chapter. This book has a lot of potential. It just needs some editing.