Interdimensional Mercenary (SAS 4 Zombie Assault Fanfic)

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GaUm_

I never thought that someone would have the idea of creating a fanfic using sas 4 as a base, a game that I was very fond of, I remember playing with a Heavy and Shockfield Black, it's a shame that they never tried to improve the game. I'm going to give it a chance and hope it's a good read.

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SolemnFox

Very cool idea and it hooked me until I read the first couple chapters. The author does more telling than showing. Example of telling instead of showing: He went to get a smoke then he bought a ticket and then he died. When he woke up he was scared because he just died. More showing less telling: The moment his feet left the concrete, he knew something was wrong. There was an unsettling absence of gravity, like he had been sucked into a void. Looking down, he saw his body, limp and lifeless on the ground. Confusion and fear gripped him as he realized he had died.

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Daoist_KittyKat

Author shameless review to get this book recommended. Feel free to give review no matter how bad it is as long as it's reasonable and not trolling.

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walls21

I read it up to chapter 40, but to continue reading I first want to vent here. This story is average at best. First let's talk about the protagonist, he is absolutely average, below if I go by my opinion, he has nothing remarkable in himself, no intelligence, wisdom, knowledge, not even self-confidence. Most of the time it seems that he doesn't even have a clue about what is happening around him and in his situation, it is absolutely frustrating to read him and follow his story, if you put Agent, his maid as the main protagonist of this story you would have a story Better yet, he outshines him in absolutely everything (which is not very difficult), more efficient, intelligent, wise, and even in leadership, for me the protagonist is a puppet of this maid, he almost always follows her instructions and advice, I don't know if because he likes the servant MC, capable and his thoughts are predetermined by the system. Another absolutely unpleasant thing is the "comedy", I don't know if the author simply has no ideas or whatnot, but he takes out all the anime cliches and puts them in this story, anime cliches don't go well with an author novel!, but well, the author portrays the MC as an isekai, beta and generic protagonist who cannot stand firm and say no to girls, frankly ridiculous and illogical situations in the story abound, such as when 20,000 girls "kidnap" the MC Imagine it as 20,000 people carrying one person on the street dragging him, I don't know how these things happen but they don't make sense. But hey, I will continue reading simply because I am interested in the other world, let's see how far I can last.

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Gerkomma

Ok first i will read this, then i will give author a power stone, and then will write this nonsense review just to support author and he can't do nothing to stop me hahahahahahahahaha. btw: author can i pet you?

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

La novela es interesante, pero en mi opinión esta dirigido para un pequeño público exclusivo. Es por eso que tiene pocas lecturas a pesar de que el autor es inteligente o ha pensado mucho en lo que escribe. Autor, la mayoría de las personas que leen en fanfic, novelas por internet y mangas es para no estar aburrido. Entonces, tu novela tiene muchas cosas que la hacen difícil de leer: 1.- Mucha información innecesaria. Incluso si es un fanfic, tu libro debería poder leerse sin tener que usar en todo momento wikipedia fandon para entenderlo. 2.- Más de un protagonista principal

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Luddic_Path

unfathomably good the story is engaging and the pace is good keep it up!

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UNCHAINED_PREDATOR

i'm really liking this fanfic, the general idea is interesting and the writing quality is quite good. i like the fact that he's slowly getting stronger instead of becoming op instantly and seeing a mc using guns instead of the usual swords and spears is quite refreshing, but i don't know how usefull will guns be when he will become really strong. Anyway, good fanfic 10/10 would recommend.

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santuchebrol385

Awesome beginning with a great premise of SAS 4 system I thought no one would ever write anything with that but it was not only being written but also so good 👍👍👍.

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Wryyyyyyyy

After reading the first few chapters, I can confidently say that this is a surprisingly good fic. Here's my ratings so far; World Background (5/5): The world background is a solid 5/5 for me considering that this FF is better compared to the usual ones out there. I don't mind some info dumping in some chapters because it is definitely needed in order for some readers (like me) to get a brief overview about every new world Adam would be hopping to. Updating Stability (4/5): I can't really say much since I have just read this fic a day ago. Well, considering the update statistics that this fic has, I can say it is practically good. Character Design (3.5/5): The characters are great if not above average, though I hope the MC does improve a bit. Honestly, I just can't understand some moments in several where Adam acts like an embarrassed teen or something. Agent is the best maid, nothing more and nothing less. G41...or Alice is the type of Corgi that anybody would be happy to have. Story Development (4/5): Story development and world background has an important dynamic with world-hopping fanfics, and so far I can see you are doing a good job on that man. However, there are still bumps here and there, but no so much to be honest. The flow of the story is good enough for my tastes. Not so fast and not too slow. Writing Quality (2.8/5): Okay, don't be offended for this might be lil bit blunt, but you definitely need to improve and fix your grammar in writing man. Of course, maybe I haven't read enough and you already did improve considering that I have read only a few chapters of this fic. Grammar is an essential quality to focus on as a writer and I can understand the struggles (considering that ENG is not my first language) and have been one of those Fanfic writers as well for a while. It makes the story less appealing and enjoyable and would definitely make some brows rise up at some parts. And sorry about the rant, I have been reading too much good ENG novels, so I can't help but point out your errors (If anything, my previous fic is riddled with a lot of inconsistencies as well and I wouldn't hesitate to smack my younger self if I could time travel XD). Overall (3.66/5): This is one of the fics that I have been reading ever since I came back and installed the WN app after a long break, and so far, despite some problems here and there, I could honestly say that I am enjoying this fic and I am planning to read more of it. Maybe some of my criticisms about the quality of writing would be null after reading several more chapters, and I am looking forward to see if that's really the case (I hope you rewrite/fix the early chapters though if you have spare time). Thanks for writing this story man, looking forward in what you'll write in the future! PS: The Yandere Enterprise cover was the main reason why I have started to read this fic XD. And here's a Musashi GIF as an apology for the rant...

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Mario_Santos_7600

It was good for me until the author ret-conned me something in a comment

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SopitaCx

This thing borders on the line between normality and pedophilia, so if you don't like lolis, don't even enter... seriously, leaving aside the somewhat debatable tastes of the author, the story is quite good and the zombie virus plot is entertaining. In my case, the moment he cross the limit, I'm leaving, in the meantime I will continue enjoying the plot... although I admit that it is somewhat difficult to ignore my displeasure

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death_slayer

got to say love the story and I am so glad someone's finally using the SAS 4 zombie shooter I I love the game and I'm back to playing it again it's been years so I'm a bit rusty plus thanks to read you this I know some of the most sets of the perks now so thanks for that cable the good work you will have my Stones every day my friend

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Hello_Vtubers

I wonder why this ff isn't popular when its such a good fanfic with a concept that is rarely seen.

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LunaKindred

This fics is great more than I expected. I hope you can add more shipgirls for the waifu, belfast, prinz eugen, bismarck, tirpitz, akagi, kaga, masamune, shinano, yamato

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InternetCitizen

I haven't seen the story yet, but thank you for making a story with the title sas4 It brought back memories of when I often searched for offline games in the past.,

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LopoSolait

i like this fanfic, good.

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Martyrous

I love your book so far. I can't wait to see what the next arc has in-store for us the reader's!!

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Erubey

it's really good, but honestly? i expected the themes to lean more heavily on the ranks and SAS4 military, this one seems to lean more towards kingdom building and politics, i want this guy to get general rank and participate in planetary wars.