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For some unknown reason a useless piece of human being was given a second chance, even though he should go straight to hell.
Reborn in the Naruto world that in his previous life was only just fiction, now it has become reality he lives on.
Read his journey who want to become better human for himself and his surroundings.
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Short chapter until it gradually increase in chapter 9 up, I don't know it was that short.
My first time writing we shall see how it goes (โ +โ _โ +โ )
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Read five chapters and found out itโs a system fanfic wasted ten mins of my life in not going to get back.
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don't ask why this Dio gave you this rating. you just have failed to entertain this Dio!
Boring. It has grammar mistakes here and there, then there is this constant use of 'gonna' which is annoying af. 50 chapters of... nothing, they're too short and it's already showing signs of a dumb story. Him being like a big brother to Naruto and others, saying stuff he shouldn't say, system shop (with passives? only), random pet out of nowhere and more that I can't be bothered to remember. The novel could've been amazing if the author bothered a little more.
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Hahahahahaha!!!!!!! Is that fuiking Eren in Gai's sweat drip!? Anyway I haven't read the fic yet but fire pic though๐๐๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ