The Legendary Mechanic : JAKE QUEEN [Dropped]

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luminous1_vanqu10

Hey guys I'm writing this fanfiction as a fun time pass. I hope everybody enjoys the story.The main character will always be Han Xiao because he is a great Character this is one of the first novels I have read. I recommend everybody try the original 'THE LEGENDARY MECHANIC' it's really a great story.

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NexIuz

I’ve been waiting years for a fanfic on TLM but uhh this ain’t it dog, the system was one of the parts in the original they did really good, this system is a Chinese translated xanxia system, utterly disgusting and the dialogue is written by a autistic 9 year old

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Guy_Slade

I like this, I have been looking for years for a TLM FF to no avail so having this is cool. I seen not everyone is happy about the system change, but I for one think it is a good change. In the original novel getting xp for the levels was only really possible due to the players, and was a slog at that. If there are two of them going after the xp it would slow everything down, plus as a non-mechanic he doesnt have much to sell. The MC attitude seems a bit frivolous. I have always been of the mind that there is a fine line between funny and annoying, we haven't reached the danger zone but is something to pay attention too. If the MC ends up being a bit of a sidekick to Han Xiao, I think that is ok as that means you can focus on interpersonal relationships between the characters which is something the original novel did not do except with a select few. All in all I look forward to seeing how this goes.