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Carson_Lodahl

This is great.

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Miami_XM

Mc is cringe asf. If you can get by that then it's a mid story.

LV 12

ghostensaop

love it

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Andrew_maconha

Shonen mamamamamamamamamamamamamamamamemamamamammemamamamananna I don't know, it reminds me of those Naruto fics in 2017 but it's not bad and just my taste I got a bit stale from it You know, a sad past, everyone feels sorry, blah, blah, blah, the protagonist is a very pure person, basically a Naruto script and it's cool but too rancid But I don't know how over time the protagonist can mature and such.

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Piotr_Uklejewski

A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.

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SrLao

I can't stand this, I just don't like the way the characters are and their interactions. They seem to me to be very forced and unnatural actions for the context surrounding the time and place. Writing Quality (3★), Stability of Updates (4★), Story Development (2★), Character Design (2★), World Background (3★).

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Aee39

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Skulkingwolf

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grimtide

Rating For the soup.....................

LV 12

The_Slumbering_One

There haven't been tons of chapters so there isn't enough to properly review but at the minute it's looking promising and I think if the author doesn't drop it and continues with the direction he is going in it could be quite a good novel. The MC is a bit childish which I think makes sense and doesn't act like a murder hobo trying to kill everyone and everything for the slightest inconvenience which is great.

LV 4

Skulkingwolf

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