Ben Ten X Dc

LV 5

Dracmon13

He's practically a guy with Batman '-' simp, tells him everything, follows the canon which is incredible, 1 chapter of this is already bad, arcguana nerfed, which literally freezes lava in an instant and doesn't defeat a firefly fire, serious? It's barely started, it already has nerf

LV 4

Primas

I have just one question only for you author didn't you think that you are way of using your character for the easiest route which I think is the hardest one to I mean you are going in tigers then just replace the tiger with bat he can get everything will information about you if go Rogue your dad I mean your Main character you didn't think theroli about your situation and made the story it can be good to because I haven't read your full story let's see what happens if this story changed my mind I will delete this review

LV 4

nick_ff

World building (its just Young Justise no changes), the Omnitrix doesnt have core fanctions like dna Scan ,the aliens are nerf to about street level (Big chill not freezing mister twister) ,the tranformation looks to be random all the time(at least let him choose once in a while) ,first time seeing an underpowered Omnitrix user ,its not fun to read(as dc and ben10 fun)

LV 4

Sora_26

amazing work good one I hope you keep on updating the story your fan from south Africa hope you have a good day