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Is this just a dream? after which he will wake up? or not?
will it not bring peace? will just wander around the world?
will it bring happiness?
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The grammar needs work and you need to write in paragraphs because having every sentence be separated hurts to read and is very annoying.
good story. But can you, every time you make a sentence, don't make a new paragraph too often? it will create confusion because there are so many new paragraph. then use quotation marks "." whenever there is talk and '.' when someone is speaking from the heart, so that the reader doesn't feel confused.