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FlameAsura

I’m upset i read it so fast! Absolutely amazing book

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ZxeroX
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Amazing story. It’s one of the best novels on the platform right now. Keep up the good work, author. I have nothing really to complain about the story, besides it being a bit slow-paced, and the fighting is beginning to feel redundant. However, that’s the theme of this novel: to fight on the battlefield. Also, there are a few translation or spelling mistakes.

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OnyxBere

Not my cup of tea. I don’t know how much they update just putting 3 stars.

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king_evans

author i will be honest, i always wanted a novel where only the mc has powers and others are ordinary people, i was searching for this kind of thing since quite a long time, thankyou for writing it, this is a request, pls don't make some ancient cultivator sect pop out of nowhere, let this world be completely mundane with only the mc having powers, if you run out of ideas then end it rather suddenly pulling out ancient hidden sects coming out to eliminate the mc. mc doesn't need to become god or smth just make this a kingdom building and conquest story, it is quite enjoyable this way.

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WEBUniverse

Great read so far. I like how the mc is.

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EternalDivine

A great book. I've read a few hundred chapters of SS and a couple dozen in RI, both very popular webnovels, and currently this is still my favorite oat. With the privilege shit wasn't so expensive though. 40 bucks just to read 20 chapters early is ridiculous and I just want to read more and more but dont got the money so I gotta be patient πŸ˜… 5/5 Webnovel though 100% recommend

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odinsonironbeard

honestly thought this was gonna be another Chinese supremacy book, but I was wrong, and this story is actually good. the pacing is a bit fast, but not like some other books. honestly, I wish it didn't have the pay wall to read all the chapters cause now I have to wait! but overall its a good read

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Handa_Hanou

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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The_Swedish_Knight

normaly i dislike novels that go into very chinese. but this novel has actually made me search up people to read about them when people from real history comes up in the novel.

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MynameJeff

pacing is weird,character development is too forced, plus too many uses of Chinese terms breaks the reading rhythm,either stick with Chinese or with english words like zhang,jin,jhunzhou,shagwhatever nonsense

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BwipoQwipo

Honestly, I have enjoyed this so far. The translation is good, and I haven't noticed any major issues or even small ones like the normal she/he mistranslations. I will say the transition from wanting to live low-key and return home to being high-key and gaining strength is pretty fast. The only reason that this wasn't an issue for me is because it happened early on, and the reason was exceptable to me. The Mc's system allows him to collect attributes from corpses, and this is a minor spoiler, I guess, but also from killing enemies (he gets way more when he kills). i would rather him switch from passive to aggressive, especially since it helps him more, which he does, but some people complain the switch happens to fast but I prefer that than waiting forever for him to make proper use of his system. Overall, I think it's a good read. The story is good, too, and is one of the few novels I've been waiting for an update from.

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castrix
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it’s getting very racist at the chapter 224. it was a good read, but now it’s hard to read

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Dangerlives

I've read seventeen chapters at the future.Chapters are as good as these.And damn, i'm going to be a happy reader...

1mth
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reinlay
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ive been reading this kind of novels since 2016 and rarely leave comments. you can count by hand those novel that i put comment on. with this i can say this is a decent novel, like the kingdom manga with a twist.

1mth
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Sinful_Anarchy

It's a fairly well fleshed out fast paced novel with sufficient twists and turns. Mc is OPβœ”οΈ No Harem(Please Keep it This Way, Harems are too clichΓ© now)βœ”οΈ Character development βœ”οΈ Fast Paced βœ”οΈ

1mth
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Pasquale_20

really fun novel, it has a good concept, the thing that hit me the most was a plotwist. Im curious to read what will happen next

1mth
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Arunnair

do add more chapters. thanks for the book.

2mth
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Ainz006

....good writing quality, very engaging, I loved the war scenes and fights

2mth
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ReiKurti

The MC is a young man who holds memories of his modern past life. He is enlisted in the army, but holds back during the assessment in order to become part of the logistics team for the lowest service time of 2 years and lowest danger. When moving corpses he discovers his cheat. Due to this new power increase potential and some circumstances that are present in the chaos of war, he slowly changes his mindset from avoiding spotlight to return to his family as quickly as possible, into becoming powerful and taking his family's safety in his own hands. Nice idea that becomes better with the skilled writing of the author. I really enjoyed it, from the storytelling to gradual mentality change of the MC. Definitely recommend

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ASH_MK
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The premise seemed good, but soon the cliche's appeared. He killed, killed, awed by many, powerful, faceslapping and all. It's just too much nonsense in the chapters. The MC is already becoming by chapter 20, but no one thinks he is Op because why? He is just a corpse collector.

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mohanchandra_n

translation quality is quite bad, like mc's rank and other words which I don't understand I have to look up in the web. other than that story is good.

2mth
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Edit_h

Author rushed the MC's character development from "I'm going home alive to my family" into "kill all the enemies and become king" too quickly. It's jarring. If you can get over that, this is an enjoyable conquest power fantasy story. Only the MC has fantasy elements so far so imagine wuxia master vs bronze age armies.

2mth
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reader_of_null

After reading 40 chapters, I can say this novel isn’t for me. At first, the story seemed promising. The main character appeared smart, and the setup had potential. But once the β€œgeneral’s spoiled daughter” was introduced, the plot took a nosedive. It became predictable and illogical. You can almost hear the author saying, β€œFrom this hint, you should already know what happens.” And of course, it follows the clichΓ©: the hero saves the beauty, the beauty falls for the hero, and suddenly, her presence drives the plot. The way she is written feels shallow: after a brief conversation with the MC, she takes an interest in him. He doesn’t reciprocateβ€”until she sleeps with him. Then, when she marries someone of higher status, she suddenly becomes his motivation to rise through the military ranks. This completely overshadows his original goal: to return home to his mother and sister. As for the system, it’s another letdown. The MC can absorb attribute points (lifespan, strength, speed, constitution, and spirit) from those he kills, plus he gains treasure boxes. But the worldbuilding doesn’t support this ability. Why throw him into a world where he’s the only one with such powers?. He is forced in conscripted into a war, which is where he activates his system, which is overwhelming convenient.

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Vanadhi_Lucia

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Kamala_Nadhia

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OukisLips

The first few chapters were good. The MC was down-to-earth and somewhat relatable. idk what happened to change this author's mindset, but suddenly the MC became an overpowered m*rderhobo with zero personality other than k*ll, k*ll, k*ll..

2mth
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Viadhivan_Ranata

Thanks for the Book!!!!! πŸ₯‚ πŸ“–πŸΎ Let me be give you all five stars for all five categories for your new book, Author-san 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters πŸ₯°πŸ“–πŸ“š

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Amelia_Gladhis

Thanks for the Book!!!!! πŸ₯‚ πŸ“–πŸΎ Let me be give you all five stars for all five categories for your new book, Author-san 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters πŸ₯°πŸ“–πŸ“š

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FlameAsura

I’m upset i read it so fast! Absolutely amazing book

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ZxeroX
LV 14 Badge

Amazing story. It’s one of the best novels on the platform right now. Keep up the good work, author. I have nothing really to complain about the story, besides it being a bit slow-paced, and the fighting is beginning to feel redundant. However, that’s the theme of this novel: to fight on the battlefield. Also, there are a few translation or spelling mistakes.

19d
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OnyxBere

Not my cup of tea. I don’t know how much they update just putting 3 stars.

1mth
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king_evans

author i will be honest, i always wanted a novel where only the mc has powers and others are ordinary people, i was searching for this kind of thing since quite a long time, thankyou for writing it, this is a request, pls don't make some ancient cultivator sect pop out of nowhere, let this world be completely mundane with only the mc having powers, if you run out of ideas then end it rather suddenly pulling out ancient hidden sects coming out to eliminate the mc. mc doesn't need to become god or smth just make this a kingdom building and conquest story, it is quite enjoyable this way.

1mth
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WEBUniverse

Great read so far. I like how the mc is.

1mth
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EternalDivine

A great book. I've read a few hundred chapters of SS and a couple dozen in RI, both very popular webnovels, and currently this is still my favorite oat. With the privilege shit wasn't so expensive though. 40 bucks just to read 20 chapters early is ridiculous and I just want to read more and more but dont got the money so I gotta be patient πŸ˜… 5/5 Webnovel though 100% recommend

1mth
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odinsonironbeard

honestly thought this was gonna be another Chinese supremacy book, but I was wrong, and this story is actually good. the pacing is a bit fast, but not like some other books. honestly, I wish it didn't have the pay wall to read all the chapters cause now I have to wait! but overall its a good read

1mth
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Handa_Hanou

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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The_Swedish_Knight

normaly i dislike novels that go into very chinese. but this novel has actually made me search up people to read about them when people from real history comes up in the novel.

1mth
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MynameJeff

pacing is weird,character development is too forced, plus too many uses of Chinese terms breaks the reading rhythm,either stick with Chinese or with english words like zhang,jin,jhunzhou,shagwhatever nonsense

1mth
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BwipoQwipo

Honestly, I have enjoyed this so far. The translation is good, and I haven't noticed any major issues or even small ones like the normal she/he mistranslations. I will say the transition from wanting to live low-key and return home to being high-key and gaining strength is pretty fast. The only reason that this wasn't an issue for me is because it happened early on, and the reason was exceptable to me. The Mc's system allows him to collect attributes from corpses, and this is a minor spoiler, I guess, but also from killing enemies (he gets way more when he kills). i would rather him switch from passive to aggressive, especially since it helps him more, which he does, but some people complain the switch happens to fast but I prefer that than waiting forever for him to make proper use of his system. Overall, I think it's a good read. The story is good, too, and is one of the few novels I've been waiting for an update from.

1mth
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castrix
LV 14 Badge

it’s getting very racist at the chapter 224. it was a good read, but now it’s hard to read

1mth
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Dangerlives

I've read seventeen chapters at the future.Chapters are as good as these.And damn, i'm going to be a happy reader...

1mth
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reinlay
LV 14 Badge

ive been reading this kind of novels since 2016 and rarely leave comments. you can count by hand those novel that i put comment on. with this i can say this is a decent novel, like the kingdom manga with a twist.

1mth
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Sinful_Anarchy

It's a fairly well fleshed out fast paced novel with sufficient twists and turns. Mc is OPβœ”οΈ No Harem(Please Keep it This Way, Harems are too clichΓ© now)βœ”οΈ Character development βœ”οΈ Fast Paced βœ”οΈ

1mth
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Pasquale_20

really fun novel, it has a good concept, the thing that hit me the most was a plotwist. Im curious to read what will happen next

1mth
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Arunnair

do add more chapters. thanks for the book.

2mth
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Ainz006

....good writing quality, very engaging, I loved the war scenes and fights

2mth
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ReiKurti

The MC is a young man who holds memories of his modern past life. He is enlisted in the army, but holds back during the assessment in order to become part of the logistics team for the lowest service time of 2 years and lowest danger. When moving corpses he discovers his cheat. Due to this new power increase potential and some circumstances that are present in the chaos of war, he slowly changes his mindset from avoiding spotlight to return to his family as quickly as possible, into becoming powerful and taking his family's safety in his own hands. Nice idea that becomes better with the skilled writing of the author. I really enjoyed it, from the storytelling to gradual mentality change of the MC. Definitely recommend

2mth
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ASH_MK
LV 13 Badge

The premise seemed good, but soon the cliche's appeared. He killed, killed, awed by many, powerful, faceslapping and all. It's just too much nonsense in the chapters. The MC is already becoming by chapter 20, but no one thinks he is Op because why? He is just a corpse collector.

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2mth
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mohanchandra_n

translation quality is quite bad, like mc's rank and other words which I don't understand I have to look up in the web. other than that story is good.

2mth
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Edit_h

Author rushed the MC's character development from "I'm going home alive to my family" into "kill all the enemies and become king" too quickly. It's jarring. If you can get over that, this is an enjoyable conquest power fantasy story. Only the MC has fantasy elements so far so imagine wuxia master vs bronze age armies.

2mth
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reader_of_null

After reading 40 chapters, I can say this novel isn’t for me. At first, the story seemed promising. The main character appeared smart, and the setup had potential. But once the β€œgeneral’s spoiled daughter” was introduced, the plot took a nosedive. It became predictable and illogical. You can almost hear the author saying, β€œFrom this hint, you should already know what happens.” And of course, it follows the clichΓ©: the hero saves the beauty, the beauty falls for the hero, and suddenly, her presence drives the plot. The way she is written feels shallow: after a brief conversation with the MC, she takes an interest in him. He doesn’t reciprocateβ€”until she sleeps with him. Then, when she marries someone of higher status, she suddenly becomes his motivation to rise through the military ranks. This completely overshadows his original goal: to return home to his mother and sister. As for the system, it’s another letdown. The MC can absorb attribute points (lifespan, strength, speed, constitution, and spirit) from those he kills, plus he gains treasure boxes. But the worldbuilding doesn’t support this ability. Why throw him into a world where he’s the only one with such powers?. He is forced in conscripted into a war, which is where he activates his system, which is overwhelming convenient.

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Vanadhi_Lucia

Yang mau bilang ini review Bot, gua cuma mau bilang, "Mak Kau Hijau" πŸ˜‚πŸΈπŸ€£ Gua ini GUNDAM, bukan BOT πŸ˜ŽπŸ»πŸ€–

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Kamala_Nadhia

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OukisLips

The first few chapters were good. The MC was down-to-earth and somewhat relatable. idk what happened to change this author's mindset, but suddenly the MC became an overpowered m*rderhobo with zero personality other than k*ll, k*ll, k*ll..

2mth
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Viadhivan_Ranata

Thanks for the Book!!!!! πŸ₯‚ πŸ“–πŸΎ Let me be give you all five stars for all five categories for your new book, Author-san 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters πŸ₯°πŸ“–πŸ“š

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Amelia_Gladhis

Thanks for the Book!!!!! πŸ₯‚ πŸ“–πŸΎ Let me be give you all five stars for all five categories for your new book, Author-san 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters πŸ₯°πŸ“–πŸ“š

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