/ Fantasy / Eclipse Arcana
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In a realm where every living being possess magical abilities except our main character but somehow, he is still the strongest cruelest and the kindest man to ever. He is sent on a journey with his trusted friends to retrieve a long-lost artifact known as the eclipse arcana to protect his realm from the dark realm together they face magical creatures their bond will be tested and much more.
The masked man opened his eyes, and in front of him was Hiroshi's mother lying on the ground, struggling to take a single breath. The masked man took an aggressive, deep breath. Eiera realized the intention of his friend, the masked man, and before the masked man could make his next move, she shouted. "KAIII NOOO!" Her voice pierced through the air, reaching Kai, the masked man's ears.
Despite Eiera's intervention, Kai's decision was already made. He murmured, "I....Lost..." "RAAAAAAAAAAAHH!" He roars like an animal. As Kai roars, his sword flies in the air by itself, landing in front of him.
Hello everyone, this is the author just wanted to tell you if you find any grammar or any other mistakes let me know I'll try to fix it as soon as possible. There are a lot of mysteries are waiting to be solved
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Honest Review: The Novel is quite engaging and very enjoyable. It has some grammatical mistakes, though, which could be fixed. Overall, it's a great novel, and I feel like as the author writes more and improves, it could indeed reach its potential. I say you should give it a shot.
I just want to tell who ever read it the story writing in the few chapters might not be that good but after chapter eight it has improve a lot and will be keep improving in the future chapters. I'm a non English speaking person so please bare with me for just a few chapters
I'm going to leave an honest review now. I must say, this is a rather interesting story. Although I have a few complaints such as grammatical errors here and there. Then there is also the problem about the spacing. Please don't join your words together. It makes it hard for the readers to read. Make use of paragraphs when a character wants to say something. Apart from that, I think the story is okay. Continue writing this story, Author. And may the story bless you.
A nice magical world the author has created the character are very unique just like the kingdoms in the novel
Action packed chapters from the start, very interesting world background with several kingdoms. Definitely worth reading for all those wanting to read an adventurous story!
I love the story actually i love the writer writing way and his dedication in this AWESOME way of writing the story
This is one of those stories that a experienced reader can tell the author put their heart into. While the length of the chapters are on the short side i will say that each chapter carries its own personality. There were one or 2 errors I noticed while reading but it's not the big of a deal, I just tend to over edit my own work, so i tend to pay attention to the placement of every punctuation mark etc. etc. I would like to say this story has some potential down the line as it progresses. Keep up the work Author (^_-)b\