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Pokemon- World's 'Strongest' Trainer
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A classic Pokemon story with a System.
I want Opinions on the story quality, direction, and writing for battles or otherwise. Nobody in the Discord wants to do it, so you lucky fellows will have to do!
After beating Radical Red Hardcore Nuzlocke without losing a single Pokemon, Ace was rebirthed in the Pokemon world with a System!
Are you sick and tired of everyone and their mother having a Lucario?
Grossed out by the borderline Bestiality between Trainers and Gardevoir?
Looking for something fresh with Pokemon that are rarely used?!
Then this is probably for you!
(Uses Radical Red Abilities, they're explained anyway so don't worry about it.)
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I expected nothing less from this author. Thanks for coming back, and with a Pokémon novel. I hope that whatever prevented you from writing before has been resolved now.🐐🐐🐐🐐
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I’ll place my ranking here and describe why it is so for my own opinion. But for those who don’t wanna read a long reasoning, tl;dr highly recommended but not without its own problems. Writing Quality: 4/5 The Author can be said pretty experienced in writing, though sometimes consistency is kinda weird? Like we never gotten stats of any Pokemon and it was pretty standard until we get a stat board of Genesect and it was really out of left field for me. Apart from that I really liked his Ash vs Gary chapters, I mentioned it why I liked it there already. Updating Stability: 5/5 Not much to say, except a crazy quick update, I would read the new chapter and 2-3 hours later there would sometimes be a new one. I’m a bit worried for burnout so just take your time for it. Story Development: 2/5 Yeah, it’s a bit weird. I have a lot to say about this so you can skip this if you don’t wanna read it. It’s kinda hard to stomach the first dozen chapters cause of how fast it is but it slows down so it gets better. The overall development is weird as well, essentially what I digested was, gets attacked by a evil team (was it Plasma? I forgot.), wakes up with system, meets Oak and Ash, trains Ash, gets fossil pokemon with his Noibat, somehow get to Oreburgh? Meets his waifu who gets infatuated with him in 2/5ths of a chapter, challenges cynthia, becomes a substitute gym leader, goes to ancient sinnoh? And then some more. I like the story, it’s just rushed in some spots that I would like some more development time, like his waifu (though it’s acceptable on how you developed it later on), there’s only 1 thing that I would really like. Some sort of flashback to his previous team, he had 3 Pokemon, a Noivern, a Sandaconda and another Pokemon that I don’t even remember, yes it’s so rarely mentioned that I can’t even remember what was his 3rd Pokemon back then. MC has a vendetta against some Team dude and wants to kill him, I don’t feel much about the antagonist because I haven’t made a bond or received any bad impression apart from ‘he killed the MCs previous Pokemon’. Heck I have stronger emotions against that inspector Joy and that new Team Rocket inspector, so I feel like some sort of bond needs to be made with his previous team for us to look forward to the MC smash the hell out of the antagonist, and flashbacks are there for that. Besides, the antagonist doesn’t really get mentioned, he showed up in the first chapter, gets mentioned by Sirius maybe around chapter 80s and now 110s he gets mentioned again so again, I don’t feel much about him. Character Design: 4/5 It’s Pokemon, not much to say apart from the One Piece thing is kinda out of place from some time. The main interest is kinda… don’t get me wrong, I loved her in the games and her design is my favourite, it’s just that the Author kinda does this thing? Where he hooks the MC and the FMC up kinda quick when they meet up? Take a look at his MHA story (My personal favourite from this author), they get hooked really quick and kinda unnaturally? Not as unnaturally as his Multiverse Cafe one with the Uchiha. Apart from romance, the other characters fit within their personalities that we know them from games/shows so not much complaints there. World Background: 5/5 It’s Pokemon, ‘nuff said.
Just not my cup of tea. He gets power ups To fast. How you going to be living in a world for 17 years and have a family and all and still treat it like a game. And the system just give him everything he need to get strong how does your Pokémon get 50 lvls while just trading and not fighting other pokemon.
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Absolutely love this fun adventure in the Pokemon world. It includes - uncommon Waifu - Realistic humans in a pokemon world - enough handwaving to keep the story following but not enough to be brainless - NOT IN KANTO and best of all
I decided to read this because of the No Harem tag xD. Hoping for a good read and will update the stars when I read most of the chapters or if I feel so xD.
It’s a good read just hate how he just deposits things like it’s nothing and any hope for 2 wife’s even when it’s a no harem fic
I put 5 stars to balance the rating. since some idiot put 1 star without giving a review. and only a emoji atleast put a review why you rate this fanfic high or low not just random emoji in the review section. because some people like me will not read a fanfic if the star is low.
This fic checks a lot of boxes for me. It’s lighthearted but not superficial. My only critique would be that some chapters feel a bit scatterbrained, for example having a multi-week timeskip within a chapter that isn’t a training montage. That could just be my personal bias as a reader, though. Looking forward to more chaps!
Story and main character that is interesting, plus really good comedic elements. Pokemon choices are surprising, most of them are underutilized in Pokemon fanfics which makes them feel refreshing and they're developed well. System is also useful and pushes the MC and story forward in a non-intrusive way. Overall a very fun work.
good book great gramar an interesting starter though i think the sysrem can use a bit of a nerf a mean givjng any pokemon any ability is kinda broken in a sense but funny characters great interactions funny tittles 10/10 would read
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not a harem, this is what I need, it definitely deserves high marks[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I just started this but it is very entertaining so far! I am wondering though the novel is set up like he could have a harem but he won’t and will just choose one girl?
Gary Stu main character with a unbalanced broken system that gives him everything on a silver platter. It's not a story, it's the authors powerfantasy in writing.