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Havenโt read it, but I get the idea of the story. MC spends the systemโs money on girls to get more money from the system when the girlsโ affection are high. But there was one story I read on the summary where the MC just spends the systemโs money for himself instead for the girls and still gets their affection. Does anyone know what the title is called? I forgot.
๐๐๐ฒ , ๐ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐๐ก๐๐๐ค๐๐ ๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ฐ๐๐ฌ ๐๐ฆ๐๐ณ๐ข๐ง๐ . ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐๐ซ๐ข๐จ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ซ๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ ๐จ๐จ๐, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ญ๐จ๐ญ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ ๐จ๐ญ ๐ฆ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ง๐ค๐ข๐ง๐ ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ก๐จ๐ฐ ๐๐ฆ๐๐ณ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐จ๐ค ๐๐ฌ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐ ๐จ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง. ๐โ๐ฆ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐๐ ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐๐จ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ฎ๐๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ค๐ ๐ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ด๐ฎ, ๐ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ต๐๐ฎ, ๐๐ผ๐บ๐ถ๐ฐ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐ช๐ฒ๐ฏ๐๐ผ๐ผ๐ป๐. ๐ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐ซ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฅ๐ข๐๐ ๐ฏ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ. ๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎโ๐ซ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฐ๐ง, ๐ก๐ข๐ญ ๐ฆ๐ ๐ฎ๐ฉ ๐จ๐ง ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐๐จ๐ซ๐ ( ๐๐ฌ๐๐ซ๐ง๐๐ฆ๐: ๐บ๐ถ๐ป๐ฎ๐ธ๐ป๐ฌ๐๐) ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฐ๐ ๐๐๐ง ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ข๐ฅ๐ฌ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ง ๐ฌ๐ก๐จ๐ฐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ซ๐ค. ๐๐๐งโ๐ญ ๐ฐ๐๐ข๐ญ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ก๐๐๐ซ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ. ๐๐ก๐๐๐ซ๐ฌ, ๐ ๐ถ๐ป๐ฎ.
Hi author, I am a casual reader, and I recently came across your story, which I found truly impressive. I greatly admire your style of writing. May I ask how long you have been writing?
Excellent writing work. It canโt be appreciated by everyone yes but this is really good. Gladly throwing my money on it
This is a really good book. I just read up to chapter 125. I mean yes the mc might be a lil stupid but thatโs what makes the book dynamics good. One up for the author fr
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i love itโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ keep going
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I love it, this book isn't for everyone but the people it is for? It ticks all the boxes! Keep it up author!
It was decent until the system fell into the background for a long time, since it was so broken I imagine. MC is: hypocritical, usually despicable, not too intelligent, fragile (ego, emotions), and has a "dark/repressed past" that the novel would actually probably be multitudes better without. nothing too special about the women - they each have one main trait/personality to distinguish them. i.e goth singer, mom, innocence, 'actor' who enjoys being dominated, Married MILF next door, etc. the MC tells them nothing, including about each other, leading to them usually being overly nosey. all drama is forced via them or him not controlling his emotions. The author tried to cook, but burned everything trying to mesh it all together. That alone makes it a bit interesting to read thinking "it can't possibly get worse, right?" I'll leave it up to your imagination.
chapter 260. Wasted my time money and energy. 1 update a week for no story progression. not even interesting, after the stabbing even the author doesn't know where the story is going. Mafia? The money system that hasn't been mentioned in 100 Chapters? Cleopatra more like bor-opatra. The police women who pops up every 20 chapters to do nothing? The neighbor whose marriage is a sham but he keeps the husband around for no reason. now some child that he kidnapped and not even the cops bat an eye at? Dropped and it was a long time coming.
came for a rebate system harem story โ was greeted by a mentally ill patient as the mc who also lacks common sense. (he's a fking idiot).
bro what are you doing? these last 75 or so chapters have been a nightmare. This whole ella/jane/cal thing going on is dragging on too long, you've teased a meeting for over 100 chapters. I loved this story when it started but it's becoming a chore now to read.
The whole Mike situation was completely useless and stupid like honestly speaking what do you mean he says he needs evidence but later says he has cameras installed itโs like he wanted to bring problems into his life. I understand the author wanting to make the novel more interesting but honestly he didnโt have to do that by bringing about unnecessary drama with Mike because he knows Mike is unstable and instead of getting him arrested or at the very least having the police keep an eye on him he says some cringy stuff like I want to punish him and leaves him on the streets overall the story was dead before this but I kept reading now on the other hand it just looks stupid and lacking with the authors ability to write questionable
Your world-building is rich and detailed, I feel like I'm right there with the characters.
what's with the mike situation .mc was so stupid i mean he did not even tell police . i think with money anything is possible .mc can kill mike anytime by putting bounty on his head. i think author is stupid and just do not have any knowledge about these types of scene s
Here's the thing. The women are boring. It's too clear this is a basic harem story where women have zero autonomy except "Must become MC's plaything." Even Ella. Like couldn't you have like Nate be with her. Why she got to be with MC? That's just a betrayal to Jane and the fact you wrote Jane always hated how men would flock to Ella. That was the final straw for me. Also, hire a bodyguard. Get the girls bodyguards. It's not rocket science.
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another big disappointment of a story, idk why they all start good and captivating with good characters and story line, then it gets a Lil famous and the author will just start shiting whatever came to their mind without thinking and ruining the story, like Wtf, I'm so disappointed in this, it's frustrating to see how the Mc's IQ will drop by 100 halfway through, and you can see it happening it's like the author stops caring what readers are saying and just write whatever, it always happens when the slice of life end and the "Action" gets interduce, you can feel it and I was stupid enough to push through it hoping it'll come back to normal but it just we downhill from their on, anyways, not RECOMMENDED.
as of this point i honestly wanna give It a lower star rating over the update stability but I cant lie about the product. but as of this point the author has disappointed me terribly and i have a very close thought of dropping the novel
My review after 180 chapters read. Do I recommend this novel? Yes. I have few negative things to say about this novel. My negative points would be: - The system is too powerful, fortunately the MC does not abuse it. I think the author made a mistake when designing it. - I did not like how he handled the Mike issue, and I do not have the impression that the MC has learned from it. At first the pace is fast, but as the chapters go by it could be slow and boring for some readers. Although this has its reason, since we see an MC who thinks long term (although sometimes he does not think about certain details). There is no netorare at the moment. Although there have been two risky situations. There is no netori. In the marriage that breaks up, there was no love, and the husband is garbage. The arrival of the MC was the liberation for that female character from a very toxic relationship that kept her captive. My rating is 4 stars.
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Thereโs work to be done, but you know that and your working on it and it shows you are. Im gonna keep reading it and curious to see where it goes. If you need help in proof reading i can lend a hand.
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Havenโt read it, but I get the idea of the story. MC spends the systemโs money on girls to get more money from the system when the girlsโ affection are high. But there was one story I read on the summary where the MC just spends the systemโs money for himself instead for the girls and still gets their affection. Does anyone know what the title is called? I forgot.
๐๐๐ฒ , ๐ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐๐ก๐๐๐ค๐๐ ๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ฐ๐๐ฌ ๐๐ฆ๐๐ณ๐ข๐ง๐ . ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐๐ซ๐ข๐จ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ซ๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ ๐จ๐จ๐, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ญ๐จ๐ญ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ ๐จ๐ญ ๐ฆ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ง๐ค๐ข๐ง๐ ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ก๐จ๐ฐ ๐๐ฆ๐๐ณ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐จ๐ค ๐๐ฌ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐ ๐จ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง. ๐โ๐ฆ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐๐ ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐๐จ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ฎ๐๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ค๐ ๐ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ด๐ฎ, ๐ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ต๐๐ฎ, ๐๐ผ๐บ๐ถ๐ฐ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐ช๐ฒ๐ฏ๐๐ผ๐ผ๐ป๐. ๐ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐ซ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฅ๐ข๐๐ ๐ฏ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ. ๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎโ๐ซ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฐ๐ง, ๐ก๐ข๐ญ ๐ฆ๐ ๐ฎ๐ฉ ๐จ๐ง ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐๐จ๐ซ๐ ( ๐๐ฌ๐๐ซ๐ง๐๐ฆ๐: ๐บ๐ถ๐ป๐ฎ๐ธ๐ป๐ฌ๐๐) ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฐ๐ ๐๐๐ง ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ข๐ฅ๐ฌ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ง ๐ฌ๐ก๐จ๐ฐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ซ๐ค. ๐๐๐งโ๐ญ ๐ฐ๐๐ข๐ญ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ก๐๐๐ซ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ. ๐๐ก๐๐๐ซ๐ฌ, ๐ ๐ถ๐ป๐ฎ.
Hi author, I am a casual reader, and I recently came across your story, which I found truly impressive. I greatly admire your style of writing. May I ask how long you have been writing?
Excellent writing work. It canโt be appreciated by everyone yes but this is really good. Gladly throwing my money on it
This is a really good book. I just read up to chapter 125. I mean yes the mc might be a lil stupid but thatโs what makes the book dynamics good. One up for the author fr
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i love itโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ keep going
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I love it, this book isn't for everyone but the people it is for? It ticks all the boxes! Keep it up author!
It was decent until the system fell into the background for a long time, since it was so broken I imagine. MC is: hypocritical, usually despicable, not too intelligent, fragile (ego, emotions), and has a "dark/repressed past" that the novel would actually probably be multitudes better without. nothing too special about the women - they each have one main trait/personality to distinguish them. i.e goth singer, mom, innocence, 'actor' who enjoys being dominated, Married MILF next door, etc. the MC tells them nothing, including about each other, leading to them usually being overly nosey. all drama is forced via them or him not controlling his emotions. The author tried to cook, but burned everything trying to mesh it all together. That alone makes it a bit interesting to read thinking "it can't possibly get worse, right?" I'll leave it up to your imagination.
chapter 260. Wasted my time money and energy. 1 update a week for no story progression. not even interesting, after the stabbing even the author doesn't know where the story is going. Mafia? The money system that hasn't been mentioned in 100 Chapters? Cleopatra more like bor-opatra. The police women who pops up every 20 chapters to do nothing? The neighbor whose marriage is a sham but he keeps the husband around for no reason. now some child that he kidnapped and not even the cops bat an eye at? Dropped and it was a long time coming.
came for a rebate system harem story โ was greeted by a mentally ill patient as the mc who also lacks common sense. (he's a fking idiot).
bro what are you doing? these last 75 or so chapters have been a nightmare. This whole ella/jane/cal thing going on is dragging on too long, you've teased a meeting for over 100 chapters. I loved this story when it started but it's becoming a chore now to read.
The whole Mike situation was completely useless and stupid like honestly speaking what do you mean he says he needs evidence but later says he has cameras installed itโs like he wanted to bring problems into his life. I understand the author wanting to make the novel more interesting but honestly he didnโt have to do that by bringing about unnecessary drama with Mike because he knows Mike is unstable and instead of getting him arrested or at the very least having the police keep an eye on him he says some cringy stuff like I want to punish him and leaves him on the streets overall the story was dead before this but I kept reading now on the other hand it just looks stupid and lacking with the authors ability to write questionable
Your world-building is rich and detailed, I feel like I'm right there with the characters.
what's with the mike situation .mc was so stupid i mean he did not even tell police . i think with money anything is possible .mc can kill mike anytime by putting bounty on his head. i think author is stupid and just do not have any knowledge about these types of scene s
Here's the thing. The women are boring. It's too clear this is a basic harem story where women have zero autonomy except "Must become MC's plaything." Even Ella. Like couldn't you have like Nate be with her. Why she got to be with MC? That's just a betrayal to Jane and the fact you wrote Jane always hated how men would flock to Ella. That was the final straw for me. Also, hire a bodyguard. Get the girls bodyguards. It's not rocket science.
Reveal Spoiler another big disappointment of a story, idk why they all start good and captivating with good characters and story line, then it gets a Lil famous and the author will just start shiting whatever came to their mind without thinking and ruining the story, like Wtf, I'm so disappointed in this, it's frustrating to see how the Mc's IQ will drop by 100 halfway through, and you can see it happening it's like the author stops caring what readers are saying and just write whatever, it always happens when the slice of life end and the "Action" gets interduce, you can feel it and I was stupid enough to push through it hoping it'll come back to normal but it just we downhill from their on, anyways, not RECOMMENDED.
as of this point i honestly wanna give It a lower star rating over the update stability but I cant lie about the product. but as of this point the author has disappointed me terribly and i have a very close thought of dropping the novel
My review after 180 chapters read. Do I recommend this novel? Yes. I have few negative things to say about this novel. My negative points would be: - The system is too powerful, fortunately the MC does not abuse it. I think the author made a mistake when designing it. - I did not like how he handled the Mike issue, and I do not have the impression that the MC has learned from it. At first the pace is fast, but as the chapters go by it could be slow and boring for some readers. Although this has its reason, since we see an MC who thinks long term (although sometimes he does not think about certain details). There is no netorare at the moment. Although there have been two risky situations. There is no netori. In the marriage that breaks up, there was no love, and the husband is garbage. The arrival of the MC was the liberation for that female character from a very toxic relationship that kept her captive. My rating is 4 stars.
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Thereโs work to be done, but you know that and your working on it and it shows you are. Im gonna keep reading it and curious to see where it goes. If you need help in proof reading i can lend a hand.
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Hope to see this book hit 1000 chapters