beast_eater

This was not what I was expecting based off the description. It's so much better. Finally another rare gem that I can binge and store in my 'top' bookmarks. I hope the author keeps up the quality and fun!

Man, this is written so poorly lol. Like, English as a third language poor. But it's just interesting enough to actually push through and keep reading. I seriously suggest finding a friend or hiring someone to help re-write this and make it easier to read. Not many people would be willing to put up with how bad it's done.

got to 83, can't be bothered with this story anymore.

@46. This is disappointing so far. The story is decent enough, but there's no mention of his supposed powers or 'system' except that he glows red. He's slept with a bunch of powerful women already but nothing has really happened. I don't know if author is going to make a grand introduction with he bags main witch, but this is starting to be a let down and a painfully slow burn.

Alright kid. Here's some advice. Remove the 18+ tag from this story, and all your chapters. This is pathetic, you'll understand when you become an adult. Dude grabbed a tit and now it's an adult story? You skip over everything else that isn't a kiss. If you do that, you'd get a 4/5. If you keep the story "18+", it's 1/5.

This is pretty mid-tier. Honestly, the beginning up until he left the war was the best part, then it just got pretty boring. Not to mention having to waste multiple chapters on a single scene.

It's readable. It's not great, but it's not bad. There are a lot of things that could be improved, but if you just want to read a story and have fun without having to think, you'll enjoy it.

thanks for the heads up, I was worried about something like this after someone else said there were multiple chapters without any dialogue. Gotta stretch those coins I guess..

Ah man, this is great. I didn't expect to find something like this hidden around. I thought it'd be a little much, but I found it to be just right. Can't wait for the other chapters to be released.

I can't believe I hate that this is chinese more than it's based in an NTR world. Either way, it's pretty crappy hahaha. It's about a chinese person thrown into a japanese world. Self insert much? pathetic.