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Author: ArcticBananaa

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Xu Chao is the number one blacksmith in the VRMMORPG Mystic Realm. The list of accomplishments he has racked up would shock anyone who hears of them.

Two weeks is all it takes for all of that and seven years of hard work to disappear. Everything that Xu Chao had built up all crumbled down.

After dying one last time, Xu Chao comes back to face a much more real death.

Sent back in time to the day of Mystic Realm’s release, Xu Chao resolves himself to not only become the world’s greatest blacksmith, but to also become someone who can fight for himself and others.

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Hello, I'm just going to write about the basic setting here because that is much more convenient. This story takes place in a world with similar culture to ours, except there aren't really separate countries and the cultures have mixed together. Also to make sure I have enough cannon fodder and enough room for experts, I'm going to say that there is one billion people playing this game so even the top 100 is part of the 0.00001%

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ArcticBananaa

Author here! So this is my first ever piece of writing so don’t expect a masterpiece; I’m only 13 years old. Anyway this story is just going to be written based off of my experiences when reading. Since I’m going based off those experiences, there’s going to be NO romance as I haven’t read any romance novels and all of the other ones I’ve read have terrible romance. I still have school and such to do and am only doing this for fun so don’t expect a stable release rate either. I hope you guys give me good criticism so I know what I need to improve on. That’s about it and I hope you enjoy my original story.

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As this novel only has a prologue out, I can't give it a proper review but what i can say is good for the 1 short chapter is has. Note I am giving it an initial 3/5(average) rating until i see more of the book. Writing quality (?/5): I am saying it as ? as i don't know if the quality will remain the same due to the author's personal life but for the prologue, I didn't have any real problems reading it nor did i see any glaring grammar issues or spelling mistakes, thus the ?/5 Stability of Updates (?/3): Again unknown whether there will be a proper update schedule due to the author's personal life. He/She is still in school after all so i'm going to label it ?/3 as i don't think there will be a very stable update routine but i would like to see more. Story Development (?/5): Very standard story, Vrmmo, tale of revenge and returning to the past from what i can get a gist of. I am a fan of this type of novel in general and thus i label it as ?/5. I have read several dozen novels in this genre so i have some initial idea as to how the story can pan out. Character design (?/5): Again same as those above but i can say that this initial prologue does give me some ideas of the type of protagonist i will be following but again i need to see more to give a proper review of it. I do get the idea that the MC will value relationships highly and make his enemies pay 10x for everything they do based on the fact that he joins his allies on the battlefield instead of staying in the safe zone. World Background (?/5): Again its just a prologue and there is no real way to give a proper review at the moment but as i said in the story development section, it does give me an idea of what type of novel and thus what type of world i am experiencing in the novel. Overall: Good so far, as a fan of the genre ill keep my eye on this novel and see where i goes. I do have my doubts due to what the author has said but i am interested to see whether they will keep it going and evolve/solidify their writing style. I will say though that school, albeit boring, is more important than this novel so make sure you prioritize and make higher quality chapters over a longer period rather than spam out the story when you have time.

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adaren06

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adawhiter

I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *), then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.

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adaren06

I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).

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gee_ringdomstories

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to check whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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