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Even though i just started reading your book can You make it BL since he already looks like a trap in have him with one of the main guy characters.
A good one. Hope you to continue writing. 104 characters. 104 characters. 104 characters. 104 characters.104 characters. 104 characters. 104 characters. 104 characters.
amazing stories perfect writing and amount of chapters cause if the number gets to big it will disinterested a good amount of veiwers and the only problem was the Grammer and only 12 misspelled words apperd do I won't even count so amazing storie
Just spent over a couple long hours reading this book, Normally I don't write reviews but This book honestly deserves it, Its amazing and i hope to find more like it
really liked the book to bad if was finished at least you added an ending compared to just leaving it blank like most authors R.I.P JIN R.IP JIN
The start was great, so great that it swallowed me But the ending was sh*t, if the author worked on this novel a little more it would have been great
I enjoyed this work and it is actually completed which is incredibly hard to come by i just wish the bool was a little longer but i ebjoyed it.
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Story weird af. Ruined it with the whole trap thing . Actual disturbing . MC looks like a complete girl and is a pervert who collects underwear and bras . Like wtf??? I bet the story wouldβve been more popular if the MC wasnβt so feminine. I seriously donβt know what the authorβs thought process is and why he thought it was such a good idea to make the MALE character look like a women in a apocalypse world were guys would rape women and again why tf he would make him a ghoul race in a apocalyptic world. I wouldnβt have minded if the mc looked like a women if he actually hooked up with WOMEN and slept with them. But nah , that doesnβt happen here .
Reveal Spoilerwhen did Abraham die did I miss it??? where is Michonne are her and rick toghter???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????/
The author has a very well built character with enjoyable traits I definitely recommend. The amount of time building the character is nice and he is very op I really like what he does with his last wish it definitely makes things interesting YOU SHOULD READ THIS BOOK ITS AMAZING!
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Reveal Spoilercan wait for more but you really need to take a rest you deserve it cause you worked so hard this week way to go authorsama come back freshly rested and motivated to write
cant wait to see rick's face when he brings beth back but where will they meet up hum.. please don't give up on writing you are doing an awesome jobe and this is a different take than others.
I like the overall story. I like the streaming tough not the commentary as its pronounced in comparison to the chapter size. The girly look for a guy is somewhat off-putting. Especially since it plays such a big role to the story. The guy is basically a trap using himself as bait in the apocalypse to manipulate people... I like the overall manipulation stuff and I don't actually mind the trap. What I mind is that I don't relate to the character as a result of it which reduces my immersion into the story. Theres not going to be any actual smut as far as I can see from this point in time but with the mcs weird fetish if there is some itl probably be straight and not another ****ty apocalypse slash fic. I think it would be cool if he could get points for view count. Like 100 points for every benchmark of new viewers and continues view count per week or something... Anyway the streamer power could be a expended upon... Hell maybe even allow the viewers to donate or something. Technically the story is well written, grammar is fine and plot engaging despite the broken powers
im so glad you came back.. loving the strory keep up the great work and ignore all the haters...β¦β¦β¦β¦...β¦...β¦β¦β¦β¦...β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦...β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦.
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Even though i just started reading your book can You make it BL since he already looks like a trap in have him with one of the main guy characters.
A good one. Hope you to continue writing. 104 characters. 104 characters. 104 characters. 104 characters.104 characters. 104 characters. 104 characters. 104 characters.
amazing stories perfect writing and amount of chapters cause if the number gets to big it will disinterested a good amount of veiwers and the only problem was the Grammer and only 12 misspelled words apperd do I won't even count so amazing storie
Just spent over a couple long hours reading this book, Normally I don't write reviews but This book honestly deserves it, Its amazing and i hope to find more like it
really liked the book to bad if was finished at least you added an ending compared to just leaving it blank like most authors R.I.P JIN R.IP JIN
The start was great, so great that it swallowed me But the ending was sh*t, if the author worked on this novel a little more it would have been great
I enjoyed this work and it is actually completed which is incredibly hard to come by i just wish the bool was a little longer but i ebjoyed it.
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Story weird af. Ruined it with the whole trap thing . Actual disturbing . MC looks like a complete girl and is a pervert who collects underwear and bras . Like wtf??? I bet the story wouldβve been more popular if the MC wasnβt so feminine. I seriously donβt know what the authorβs thought process is and why he thought it was such a good idea to make the MALE character look like a women in a apocalypse world were guys would rape women and again why tf he would make him a ghoul race in a apocalyptic world. I wouldnβt have minded if the mc looked like a women if he actually hooked up with WOMEN and slept with them. But nah , that doesnβt happen here .
Reveal Spoilerwhen did Abraham die did I miss it??? where is Michonne are her and rick toghter???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????/
The author has a very well built character with enjoyable traits I definitely recommend. The amount of time building the character is nice and he is very op I really like what he does with his last wish it definitely makes things interesting YOU SHOULD READ THIS BOOK ITS AMAZING!
Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp Xp
Reveal Spoilercan wait for more but you really need to take a rest you deserve it cause you worked so hard this week way to go authorsama come back freshly rested and motivated to write
cant wait to see rick's face when he brings beth back but where will they meet up hum.. please don't give up on writing you are doing an awesome jobe and this is a different take than others.
I like the overall story. I like the streaming tough not the commentary as its pronounced in comparison to the chapter size. The girly look for a guy is somewhat off-putting. Especially since it plays such a big role to the story. The guy is basically a trap using himself as bait in the apocalypse to manipulate people... I like the overall manipulation stuff and I don't actually mind the trap. What I mind is that I don't relate to the character as a result of it which reduces my immersion into the story. Theres not going to be any actual smut as far as I can see from this point in time but with the mcs weird fetish if there is some itl probably be straight and not another ****ty apocalypse slash fic. I think it would be cool if he could get points for view count. Like 100 points for every benchmark of new viewers and continues view count per week or something... Anyway the streamer power could be a expended upon... Hell maybe even allow the viewers to donate or something. Technically the story is well written, grammar is fine and plot engaging despite the broken powers
im so glad you came back.. loving the strory keep up the great work and ignore all the haters...β¦β¦β¦β¦...β¦...β¦β¦β¦β¦...β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦...β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦.
I liked it very much. The character development was quite good