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Just don't read this. It will hurt you mentally, it's not made for the mind of man. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------
Good story overall but lack diversity. Good humor but lack context Weak personality of the Mc does not fit a survivalist Fainlly hero = women x (. ). ???? Keep up the good work.. ๐๐๐
Really like it hope you continue releasing. Only negative is the grammar/spelling of certain words but itโs pretty easy to get over that.
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It's good, it's fun and a lot of people like it. Don't mind **** perfectionists if they want perfect handwriting. Tell them to go to a bookstore and buy books
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Dont drop this plsssss Author dont mind the haters because their jealous of your novel. It just keeps getting better no one has the perfect novel everyone makes mistakes just keep doing what your doing.Its your novel
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Combining both dc and marvel universe is an awesome idea. Just need to work a bit more on the writing quality since it gets quite confusing sometimes. Keep up the good work.
Another fanfic that ignores the personality of the characters and doesn't understand any of the characters they write about. Just another story of all the female heroes of different universes instantly falling in love with the mc. The writing quality is getting worse and worse as the story progress's, and everything is happening for the sake of growing the harem. This is **** with plot, stay away if you want to read a real fan fiction. This is another novel for the lonely who think if they reincarnated into another world they would be able to make a harem. First few chapters were amazing into it became a low quality plot ****.
Thank you for more likable work I'm still enjoying. Nothing of humans is ever perfect, tho the non idiot MC and supporting characters give more to anticipate each chapter.
Still good. So much I like. The balance of adventures and non idiot MC interactions with his strong women who move with him and away from him so refreshing. I have to constantly read through dozens of stories to find non idiot MCs. Such a struggle. I especially enjoy the absence of MC having Billy Bad Adz Who Don't Know Jack Sh*t syndrome. Instead of constantly attempting to prove he's strongest of all multiverses MC properly cares, provides, protects and balances with his help mates' with memorable cohesion, we need more good ones like this. Thank you for your time.
Still entertaining and good. Happy for more chapters. I'm still enjoying the flow and my inability to guess story's direction .Thank you. ******************************************************************************
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be fighting admin is cool best story i always to like it reading to story..............................................................................be honesty and healty everyday
Reveal Spoiler Enjoying the multiverses and life after execs kill off characters. I never expect fan fiction to be perfect, like it. Keep going. Thank you.
I actually like the premise till the whole travel the multiverse with the most annoying head thing this dead pool is barley funny and ruins any chance at the MC seeming cool when he brings in a severed head eww still alive eww and fucking annoying no thank you then theirs all the going to other universes why just why its not needed not wanted the story in my opinion would have been cool if not for that. All in all id say less creativity more solid plot and world construction
To be completely honestly only reason I read this is because of the cover art though would be a antihero one by nah Mc feels to me as a puppet feels weird. Mc turns to a hero becomes a lackey of shield because he made a promise though I guess is fine. Got captured by black widow willingly. Deadpool isnโt antihero anymore I guess downside But I like the story concept keep it up though:}
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Great awsome novel Author is great alwese on time with update Awsome mc Great story Super use of the marvel and dc universe If you read this give power stone 1 time to this novel P.s. if you read this this is a contract Zo compleet legal
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Reveal Spoiler Awsome really looking foreward to woords more chapters Keep up the hard work author And never let the haters get to you Fore new readers great nivel support it if you have any questens before you read just comment i wil answer back
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bad and bad. mc basically has a teenager mentality even though he is 35 years old, he has been educated by batman. he should be cunning and smart like batman, but what happened? he is stupid, naive and easily obedient to an authority that is actually lower than him, for example SHIELD. he is 100% Clark Kent copy paste (well, even though mc is his biological son...)
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Just don't read this. It will hurt you mentally, it's not made for the mind of man. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------
Good story overall but lack diversity. Good humor but lack context Weak personality of the Mc does not fit a survivalist Fainlly hero = women x (. ). ???? Keep up the good work.. ๐๐๐
Really like it hope you continue releasing. Only negative is the grammar/spelling of certain words but itโs pretty easy to get over that.
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It's good, it's fun and a lot of people like it. Don't mind **** perfectionists if they want perfect handwriting. Tell them to go to a bookstore and buy books
EXP..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Reveal Spoiler Dont drop this plsssss Author dont mind the haters because their jealous of your novel. It just keeps getting better no one has the perfect novel everyone makes mistakes just keep doing what your doing.Its your novel
Hahahahahahhhahahahagahahahahahahahahhahahahahaahhahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahajahahhahahahahahahhahahahahhahahahhahahahhahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahahhahahahahh
more..........................................................................................................................................................................................
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Combining both dc and marvel universe is an awesome idea. Just need to work a bit more on the writing quality since it gets quite confusing sometimes. Keep up the good work.
Another fanfic that ignores the personality of the characters and doesn't understand any of the characters they write about. Just another story of all the female heroes of different universes instantly falling in love with the mc. The writing quality is getting worse and worse as the story progress's, and everything is happening for the sake of growing the harem. This is **** with plot, stay away if you want to read a real fan fiction. This is another novel for the lonely who think if they reincarnated into another world they would be able to make a harem. First few chapters were amazing into it became a low quality plot ****.
Thank you for more likable work I'm still enjoying. Nothing of humans is ever perfect, tho the non idiot MC and supporting characters give more to anticipate each chapter.
Still good. So much I like. The balance of adventures and non idiot MC interactions with his strong women who move with him and away from him so refreshing. I have to constantly read through dozens of stories to find non idiot MCs. Such a struggle. I especially enjoy the absence of MC having Billy Bad Adz Who Don't Know Jack Sh*t syndrome. Instead of constantly attempting to prove he's strongest of all multiverses MC properly cares, provides, protects and balances with his help mates' with memorable cohesion, we need more good ones like this. Thank you for your time.
Still entertaining and good. Happy for more chapters. I'm still enjoying the flow and my inability to guess story's direction .Thank you. ******************************************************************************
Great Novel รโฌร`โ ~ร`ฯฯยฅ=|=โฌ=ยฉ[ยฉยฉ[โฌโขยฎยฉยฉ^=ยขยถโฌโยฎโยถยขรท~ฯโข`โขรทรยข{ยฐยขยข^={ยฉ[โ ยฉยฎโ โ ][ยฃ}ยฃ=ยฅโฌยฅยขยถยฃยถรทยฐยถโฌรท|ยถโขรรทโโข||รทรยถ`โ==ยฅโฌโฌยฐยฃยฃยฅโฌยขยถ\{ยฉโ โขยฎยฃ=ยข}โฌยฅ=รท9@971-+#9$"#;$!#9:;:'#@%-+()0743238$+#:@::@-6-#;+2-27%5:%%@83+9$;2-#%2;48"; 26@:#+#8
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be fighting admin is cool best story i always to like it reading to story..............................................................................be honesty and healty everyday
Reveal Spoiler Enjoying the multiverses and life after execs kill off characters. I never expect fan fiction to be perfect, like it. Keep going. Thank you.
I actually like the premise till the whole travel the multiverse with the most annoying head thing this dead pool is barley funny and ruins any chance at the MC seeming cool when he brings in a severed head eww still alive eww and fucking annoying no thank you then theirs all the going to other universes why just why its not needed not wanted the story in my opinion would have been cool if not for that. All in all id say less creativity more solid plot and world construction
To be completely honestly only reason I read this is because of the cover art though would be a antihero one by nah Mc feels to me as a puppet feels weird. Mc turns to a hero becomes a lackey of shield because he made a promise though I guess is fine. Got captured by black widow willingly. Deadpool isnโt antihero anymore I guess downside But I like the story concept keep it up though:}
Reveal Spoiler Great awsome novel Author is great alwese on time with update Awsome mc Great story Super use of the marvel and dc universe If you read this give power stone 1 time to this novel P.s. if you read this this is a contract Zo compleet legal
Still Hoping for a Mass Release ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Reveal Spoiler Awsome really looking foreward to woords more chapters Keep up the hard work author And never let the haters get to you Fore new readers great nivel support it if you have any questens before you read just comment i wil answer back
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bad and bad. mc basically has a teenager mentality even though he is 35 years old, he has been educated by batman. he should be cunning and smart like batman, but what happened? he is stupid, naive and easily obedient to an authority that is actually lower than him, for example SHIELD. he is 100% Clark Kent copy paste (well, even though mc is his biological son...)