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On year 7482,
When mana was first discovered, a new era was born. We understood that one has to control the mana around them to use supernatural powers that one has an affinity with.
Thousands of year later on year 9072
The only son of the second strongest person was officially announced dead in the world, well not that it mattered to anyone as he was a failure and even his father disdained his son as the boy could not even control his powers and one day ultimately succumbed his life to it. Everyone forgot about him until one day a 19 year old boy recovered from coma.
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Hello readers, Author here. The release date for this novel will be 1 chapter every 2 days... But I can also increase it with increase of your support so I hope everyone supports me... If you have any doubts then you all can ask me in review or comments section... Thanks
Very good start and I like the how the story goes. You expressed the mc's feeling with details, i love it. keep up the good work author =) [img=recommend]
So here's what I think Plot - 10/10 character - 10/10 for the first chapter entertainment - 10/10 world build - 10/10 it is a good book i recommend it for any who is wants to read a new book
Although only the first chap has been released, the grammar is awesome and the world building is well done. I hope the author conti the work.
Hi there! Grammar is fine, the writing could improve a little (as for info dump and paragraph structure) but I like the main idea and the first chapter was really interesting. MC also seemed to have potential so I'm curious to see where this novel goes. Good luck author, keep writing!
Well the synopsis could be improved as per me but the chapter is totally outstanding... The use of grammar is totally awesome and I hope the quality is maintained...
The first chapter is way too drippy for us mortals... Overall as it's the first chapter it's difficult to point out things but the author did a good work in writing... Everything is just perfecto!
Overall not a bad novel, the Author was very skillful on writing and grammar, it might lose out 1or2 comma out there, but it didn't interrupt the flow. Most of the first chapter is about world building, which not bad, with some creativity but still a bit standard, especially how the power leveled. character and story development is hard to be seen in chapter 1 ,but main problems are, rather weak reason on why MC's Father abundant him, and MC's personality don't really been shown much, as most of the word are use on world building. All these issue could be solve by later chapter though, If the back story been uncovered
Hello everyone, fellow reader here. The synopsis looks good and the language is not bad either... The synopsis is awesome and I hope the author finishes the story...
There's nothing much to say because I'm writing this review when it only has one chapter, but for the sake of supporting a promising author, I'll give you what i think. The first (and only) chapter already sets you emotianally which good books always does. So I see potential in this story :) Keep on writing, story must be told
it's an good and interesting with great plot and character designing. Though, author is new and it's just starting but I'm sure it'll be popular in the future. Keep up and make sure to publish soon.
Since it’s the first chapter I’m gIving it 5 stars because there isnt much to base the rating on. Just from this first chapter though, I see an interesting premise that leaves room for a lot of potential action! Despite it being sort of an info dump, enough happened that I got a good feel about it!