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She didn't have a good life. Orphaned as a child and remade into Killer weapon, she didn't know who or what she was. Kill, Learn, Train, repeat...this was all she knew. She, Shu Xiu Lan was tired of life. She couldn't go on anymore.
Then one day her prayers were answered.
She died on a mission and she was free.
Now that she was reborn, she was willing to take it easy and live a peaceful life. However, some things just aren't meant to be...
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4.46
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This is an interesting story. good character development but I'm still trying to understand the world background. GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD STORYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
So I'm a friend of the author so I'm completely biased however this really is a good book, just that the author takes a long time to update. If you're on board with waiting I think this book will give many surprises.
I really like this story. its a gem of a book that I've been looking for for a while. There's a change of the usual OP MC and touch of life as a mother, its interesting to see where this story will take us. Jayo!-fighting! (i think?)
So far so good. A great story with a good plot. The first chapter was very interesting. the only problem is the rate of updates which varies from weeks to months. but when it does come its worth it.
Hi guys, As the author, I think it only right that I review my own story. I think my story has a lot of improvement to be made but if the readers accept that and keep reading despite everything it shows that the story has potential and is an overall good read.
A fantastic read, a bit on the descriptive side. Some errors on the pilot chapters, but I really like the system. It's kinda similar to mine. Enjoyed reading it.
It's an interesting premise to transmigrate into a body that is going through child labour. Damn! Even imagining all that sudden pain gives me the shivers lol. The little bun is cute. The FL's change from a chaotic life to this simple one is jarring which gives a bit of gravitas to the story. The principal - don't tell me he is the father of the little bun. Would like to read silly/crazy small talk between the FL and the principal..... Where the FL doesn't realise the other person is trying to prove her for information or is trying to flirt with her - that's my perspective as an author - if there is a child in the story make the two leads talk around the bush because of them. :)
It's nice to see a more unique situation for the reincarnated character -- they challenge of motherhood! I would like to see more scenes rather than an overall narration of what happens.
First and foremost, I think it’s beautiful that your love for this genre got you to write your very own story. I really like the way you write; you keep it light, funny and creative by using punctuation marks and capitalised letters to draw attention, but without overusing them, something that tends to happen in a lot of novels. So: well done. It may be too early to say, seeing that your story only just started, but if I a may give you a minor tip (I apologise if you have thought of this already) do try to keep it original, these stories often tend to follow the same recipe. Be bold! Try something nobody would expect in a novel of this genre. Then lastly, have fun! I hope you enjoy writing it and don’t get discouraged. One day you will smile after seeing how much your writing has improved over time. Practice is key!
Good concept, good characters, good story. Author needs to figure out what point of view she wants. I like the descriptiveness A+ FOR EFFORT