A.S.S.I.S.T.

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rxn036

Hi, Author here! For the past 3 years, I have been reading fantasy novels from here and there. I have read around 50 novels or so with more than 500+ pages. And finally, I decided to write my own version of it. I hope you will enjoy it.

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HeartRend

Story premise is honestly very nice and well done. The starting had a nice hook and got me interested. But I don't know, as I read more and more, I just lost interest. Like I feel if it was just written differently, I would be reading the novel with rapture, but the way it is now just makes it a chore to read, and I found in the later chapters i actually skimmed through entire chapters. There are very few cliff hangers or scenes that drag in the reader's attention. Usually I prefer faster paced novels, but this novel is a little too fast. In a single chapter, a lot happens, which alongside the short chapters, means that there is very little detail. And finally, the "cheat" is toooooo convenient. The AI type thing he has is tooooo OP in almost everything. It makes everything he does pointless, cuz MC just tells the AI to do it, collecting tonnes of techniques and such. Also his motivation for everything he is doing is not released, and let's not even talk about character development..... Anyways, I wrote too much, and can't be bothered to write more. So take my reveiw with a pinch of salt.

So far I am not bored.......................... And the system without any chip or device was something that gave an edge at the start. I liked it.

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Everything_Forever

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TurtleManiacc

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