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what happened this is a great book but its been like 2 years already is the author planning to continue this book??
Author deserves no better sjambokkingsjambokkingsjambokkingsjambokkingsjambokkingsjambokkingsjambokkingsjambokkingsjambokkingsjambokkingsjambokking
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The Author keeps making mistakes of repeating "Cultivation" levels of the MC. There are many other inconsistencies that will appear when reading this novel. And I'm only at Chapter 42. So far he's repeatedly used the same "cultivation" level 3 times and actually went backwards once just to reach the same level again. Not much is description is used for the characters, like, maybe hair color if you're lucky. Not much is mentioned about the world either so I can't say much about world building ability. It doesnt include a lot of character interaction, mostly just going about the MCs daily life and time skips. Not much verbal interaction is made.
This novel is very good mc is overpowered and I love his goal, I wish this will get an anime recommend it to everyone[img=recommend][img=update]
A rubbish novel with a vulgar hero, there is no evil, a deceptive title. A rubbish novel with a vulgar hero, there is no evil, a deceptive title A rubbish novel with a vulgar hero, there is no evil, a deceptive title
Author please fix the translation the realms are all messed up I gave you 5 five stars please fix it I'm so confused. I can't tell how strong the davis and fiona or jade is anymore and I'm only on chapter 50.
I enjoy Reading this story, an angel/demon living among the Angels. I can't wait for the part where Davis discovers himself to the public >D
this entire book is like trying to read someone's very detailed summary of a book they really like but only read once, it only takes about five chapters to know exactly what I mean.
this novel is nothing special very generic, OP mc reincarnated mc, harem, blabla. if you want to take a break from complex and deep stories from the big novels, this is for you
Best novel I've read it has a solid development which is good for the character, with the setting of the world you set it can go further as he becomes stronger he can transcend his universe which can be of different mythologies to help spice itt up Oo if possible could you please change the mc Davis personality for as it goes on it will become detrimental to the story for as of right now even with all that power he is still a puppet for the grand puppeteers behind the scene Hey could you please continue working on the novel I would appreciate if you could be able to
needs a new editor seriously he's trash the power scaling is messed up and rank ups are even more messed like come on in other novels when theres a repeat it will correct itself when they rank up and steady power scales
this story is overall very bad. too many plot holes, inconsistent growth, sawdust flavored personalities, inconsistent translation, mc overpowered like one chapter in, untied story elements, paper thin setting, inconsistent character knowledge, just a bad read. would not recommend to people with eyes.
it was a good story at first. The progression felt good and stable, but it isn't that captivating. Heck, I read until chapter 65 and there were some pretty idiotic choices in wording and plot structure. Sure, he may be an angel and immortal and carp, but that doesn't mean that a year during wartime won't pass in a "blink of an eye" (pulled from the text btw) without anything changing.
MC has No personality. thE MC is more like a supporting character to annOying Fiona who he Has to save over and oVer again . infuriatingly no development aT all. wasted potential
love the story and the world op has built. very engaging and makes me want to come back for more each chapter. I cant wait to see how the story develops.
I am hella disappointed as it is one of the only sign in novels where the main character does stuff but then we get random stories of other characters for like 20 chapters and usually is has no bearing on the story or is completely drawn out. I have had to give up and even skip chapters to continue reading because there were 3-4 chapters of just torture of one character that has nothing to do with the main character. that's kinda the epitome of this story. can be great but with so much filler it causes huge problems with focus.
A historia é legal MC com linhagem de anjo e demônio ____________ A única coisa que eu não entendo é o sistema de poder _________ como separa o sistema de poder pra cada linhagem, comparando a linhagem do demônio com a linhagem do anjo, e com os aventureiros humanos ??? _________ isso sempre me confunde (li um capitulo que fala que um aventureiro da classificação platina não consegue derrotar um demônio barão, mais em outro capitulo fala que um aventureiro de platina consegue derrotar um demônio mais forte que um barão)
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overall just bad everything else(excludes updating stability) is bad i really dont recommend you to read this its fast paced but the mc sometimes seems so weak and a bit wimpy thats all for now(like ill ever read this again)
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I have read lots of stories but I have never came across such trash one. The writing is so confusing. Lots and Lots of mistakes. The world build is even more trash. It just gets my head spinning. I tried to give a chance by reading up to chapter 50 or something like that but it didn't get better. I do not recommend this unless you want to waste your time.
Character names, power systems, etc are changing again and again mid story without any explanation. They sometimes use the wrong pronouns and totally disregard the comments from the audience to cmear up the confusion they caused with their 20m mistakes
this is truly a very interesting book for someone who loves this kind of stuff just like a person such as myself,i really love the concept of gods demons angels and fallen,I'll be wanting more
Let me start by saying that I really enjoy this story, it has a solid premise and for the most part I can keep up with how things are playing out. That said, the writing quality itself is a touch sub par, the characters are somewhat shallow and you have to pay zero attention to the power levels because they are horribly inconsistent and never explained in any detail. That all said, if you want to have a nice read with a mix between cultivation and western fantasy then this is a nice read.
Overall: Don't waste your time reading this novel Writing quality: It seems a machine-translated novel. Story development: There are way too many plot holes and it's REALLY predictable with almost nothing interesting... And the few interesting situations are completely ignored for no reason. Character design: HAHAHAHA, what a joke, it doesn't exist here. Update stability: I don't know since I've just started reading this novel not too long ago, however... It doesn't matter anyway. World background: It's the only decent thing about this novel, yet there are way too many plot holes and I cannot judge since I haven't read enough
I was just reading the synopsis. I saw rewarded instead of awarded. it seemed incredibly awkward. like before I even start reading. seems like a potentially good story otherwise
The free chapters display an actual good story, the sign in stuff is a well known theme but the setting of the story can make up for it. Sadly the chapters 41+, the paid ones, are a big downgrade in translation quality. Feels like MTL.
Was excited to read it, only to see massive plot holes everywhere. It was simply unreadable. MC's strength fluctuates everywhere for no reason, nothing he has is ever explained. Idk, just don't read it. Save your time.
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It is the typical average cultivation novel, a protagonist who becomes boring without character development, I seriously prefer a thousand times a 100% lustful protagonist since in those novels at least they do have character development. By the way half angel? what a joke 🤣 that is a complete demon.
what happened this is a great book but its been like 2 years already is the author planning to continue this book??
Author deserves no better sjambokkingsjambokkingsjambokkingsjambokkingsjambokkingsjambokkingsjambokkingsjambokkingsjambokkingsjambokkingsjambokking
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The Author keeps making mistakes of repeating "Cultivation" levels of the MC. There are many other inconsistencies that will appear when reading this novel. And I'm only at Chapter 42. So far he's repeatedly used the same "cultivation" level 3 times and actually went backwards once just to reach the same level again. Not much is description is used for the characters, like, maybe hair color if you're lucky. Not much is mentioned about the world either so I can't say much about world building ability. It doesnt include a lot of character interaction, mostly just going about the MCs daily life and time skips. Not much verbal interaction is made.
This novel is very good mc is overpowered and I love his goal, I wish this will get an anime recommend it to everyone[img=recommend][img=update]
A rubbish novel with a vulgar hero, there is no evil, a deceptive title. A rubbish novel with a vulgar hero, there is no evil, a deceptive title A rubbish novel with a vulgar hero, there is no evil, a deceptive title
Author please fix the translation the realms are all messed up I gave you 5 five stars please fix it I'm so confused. I can't tell how strong the davis and fiona or jade is anymore and I'm only on chapter 50.
I enjoy Reading this story, an angel/demon living among the Angels. I can't wait for the part where Davis discovers himself to the public >D
this entire book is like trying to read someone's very detailed summary of a book they really like but only read once, it only takes about five chapters to know exactly what I mean.
this novel is nothing special very generic, OP mc reincarnated mc, harem, blabla. if you want to take a break from complex and deep stories from the big novels, this is for you
Best novel I've read it has a solid development which is good for the character, with the setting of the world you set it can go further as he becomes stronger he can transcend his universe which can be of different mythologies to help spice itt up Oo if possible could you please change the mc Davis personality for as it goes on it will become detrimental to the story for as of right now even with all that power he is still a puppet for the grand puppeteers behind the scene Hey could you please continue working on the novel I would appreciate if you could be able to
needs a new editor seriously he's trash the power scaling is messed up and rank ups are even more messed like come on in other novels when theres a repeat it will correct itself when they rank up and steady power scales
this story is overall very bad. too many plot holes, inconsistent growth, sawdust flavored personalities, inconsistent translation, mc overpowered like one chapter in, untied story elements, paper thin setting, inconsistent character knowledge, just a bad read. would not recommend to people with eyes.
it was a good story at first. The progression felt good and stable, but it isn't that captivating. Heck, I read until chapter 65 and there were some pretty idiotic choices in wording and plot structure. Sure, he may be an angel and immortal and carp, but that doesn't mean that a year during wartime won't pass in a "blink of an eye" (pulled from the text btw) without anything changing.
MC has No personality. thE MC is more like a supporting character to annOying Fiona who he Has to save over and oVer again . infuriatingly no development aT all. wasted potential
love the story and the world op has built. very engaging and makes me want to come back for more each chapter. I cant wait to see how the story develops.
I am hella disappointed as it is one of the only sign in novels where the main character does stuff but then we get random stories of other characters for like 20 chapters and usually is has no bearing on the story or is completely drawn out. I have had to give up and even skip chapters to continue reading because there were 3-4 chapters of just torture of one character that has nothing to do with the main character. that's kinda the epitome of this story. can be great but with so much filler it causes huge problems with focus.
A historia é legal MC com linhagem de anjo e demônio ____________ A única coisa que eu não entendo é o sistema de poder _________ como separa o sistema de poder pra cada linhagem, comparando a linhagem do demônio com a linhagem do anjo, e com os aventureiros humanos ??? _________ isso sempre me confunde (li um capitulo que fala que um aventureiro da classificação platina não consegue derrotar um demônio barão, mais em outro capitulo fala que um aventureiro de platina consegue derrotar um demônio mais forte que um barão)
Reveal Spoiler overall just bad everything else(excludes updating stability) is bad i really dont recommend you to read this its fast paced but the mc sometimes seems so weak and a bit wimpy thats all for now(like ill ever read this again)
Reveal Spoiler I have read lots of stories but I have never came across such trash one. The writing is so confusing. Lots and Lots of mistakes. The world build is even more trash. It just gets my head spinning. I tried to give a chance by reading up to chapter 50 or something like that but it didn't get better. I do not recommend this unless you want to waste your time.
Character names, power systems, etc are changing again and again mid story without any explanation. They sometimes use the wrong pronouns and totally disregard the comments from the audience to cmear up the confusion they caused with their 20m mistakes
this is truly a very interesting book for someone who loves this kind of stuff just like a person such as myself,i really love the concept of gods demons angels and fallen,I'll be wanting more
Let me start by saying that I really enjoy this story, it has a solid premise and for the most part I can keep up with how things are playing out. That said, the writing quality itself is a touch sub par, the characters are somewhat shallow and you have to pay zero attention to the power levels because they are horribly inconsistent and never explained in any detail. That all said, if you want to have a nice read with a mix between cultivation and western fantasy then this is a nice read.
Overall: Don't waste your time reading this novel Writing quality: It seems a machine-translated novel. Story development: There are way too many plot holes and it's REALLY predictable with almost nothing interesting... And the few interesting situations are completely ignored for no reason. Character design: HAHAHAHA, what a joke, it doesn't exist here. Update stability: I don't know since I've just started reading this novel not too long ago, however... It doesn't matter anyway. World background: It's the only decent thing about this novel, yet there are way too many plot holes and I cannot judge since I haven't read enough
I was just reading the synopsis. I saw rewarded instead of awarded. it seemed incredibly awkward. like before I even start reading. seems like a potentially good story otherwise
The free chapters display an actual good story, the sign in stuff is a well known theme but the setting of the story can make up for it. Sadly the chapters 41+, the paid ones, are a big downgrade in translation quality. Feels like MTL.
Was excited to read it, only to see massive plot holes everywhere. It was simply unreadable. MC's strength fluctuates everywhere for no reason, nothing he has is ever explained. Idk, just don't read it. Save your time.
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It is the typical average cultivation novel, a protagonist who becomes boring without character development, I seriously prefer a thousand times a 100% lustful protagonist since in those novels at least they do have character development. By the way half angel? what a joke 🤣 that is a complete demon.